Night Vulture
Written By: Alexander Rafuls
Photos reinterpreted and edited by: Terrance Phillips
Photos reinterpreted and edited by: Terrance Phillips
Foreword:
Why I Chose Noir
Hello dear reader, my name is Alexander Rafuls. Growing up as a child, I was a huge fan of the Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtles ©. Every Saturday, I would wake up and watch the television show, and I played the video games so much that I could probably beat them using muscle memory alone. My uncle even dressed up as a Ninja Turtle for my birthday, and I’ll be damned if it wasn’t my favorite birthday of all time. So what does this have to do with this story? Well, a lot actually. See, my favorite character growing up was Raphael, the “cool but rude” turtle who always had some form of wisecrack for his enemies. Through the flows of time, Raphael evolved from “cool but rude” to the tough hotheaded badass with the Brooklyn accent. When I saw the first live action movie, I was totally shocked at how Raphael had changed, and yet I loved it. He was tough, he was a loner and he had more passion than any of the other turtles combined. Sure, his lack of patience put the turtles in some compromising positions and he even butted heads with Leonardo once or twice, but he redeemed himself by being the turtle willing to do anything to protect his brothers. I grew to love his character and soon, a pattern evolved wherein I loved every badass character in everything.
Hello dear reader, my name is Alexander Rafuls. Growing up as a child, I was a huge fan of the Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtles ©. Every Saturday, I would wake up and watch the television show, and I played the video games so much that I could probably beat them using muscle memory alone. My uncle even dressed up as a Ninja Turtle for my birthday, and I’ll be damned if it wasn’t my favorite birthday of all time. So what does this have to do with this story? Well, a lot actually. See, my favorite character growing up was Raphael, the “cool but rude” turtle who always had some form of wisecrack for his enemies. Through the flows of time, Raphael evolved from “cool but rude” to the tough hotheaded badass with the Brooklyn accent. When I saw the first live action movie, I was totally shocked at how Raphael had changed, and yet I loved it. He was tough, he was a loner and he had more passion than any of the other turtles combined. Sure, his lack of patience put the turtles in some compromising positions and he even butted heads with Leonardo once or twice, but he redeemed himself by being the turtle willing to do anything to protect his brothers. I grew to love his character and soon, a pattern evolved wherein I loved every badass character in everything.
As I grew older and I took philosophy courses and intense English classes, I
realized that my obsession was not simply with the “badass persona,” although that
was the stepping-‐stone; my obsession was actually with the flawed hero. It was the
reason I preferred heroes like Batman and Wolverine to Superman. People who
were human, made mistakes and even sometimes did the wrong thing. Sure, they
were the heroes, but sometimes they did acts even worse than the villains: kill, steal,
self-‐gratification. This renaissance of flawed heroes led me to the ultimate
archetype, the hard-‐boiled detective. Entering the world of noir, I watched Sam
Spade kiss the wife of his freshly murdered partner and Phillip Marlowe take a swig
of prohibition era booze. In other words, I fell in love with the dark, gritty reality of
the world of noir. Nowadays, I devour every page of my “Big Book of the Black
Mask” ©, the one time dominating periodical for all things noir and pulp. Reading
every short story, it became my dream to write noir tales as great as Hammett or
Chandler. This first story, which I have entitled “The Night Vulture,” will be my first attempt and, if all else, I hope it can give you a key into the wonderful world of noir
style writing. Enjoy!
Where Do We Go From Here?
“Five...four...three...two...one...Happy New Year!” screamed the energetic crowd. The balllit up, confetti poured from the sky, couples kissed, and everyone was jovial and dancing. The screams and blaring music were slightly muffled by the large glass window, but I could still barely hear what Lieutenant Maldonado was saying inches in front of me. He was stuffing a taco into his mouth without any regard for cleaning his face. He was a muscular man in his early fifties, a great
grey mane on the top of his head to match the thick mustache covering a third of his
face, which was now covered in meat sauce. He looked like Albert Einstein and
Richard Gere’s secret Hispanic love child. “Do you understand, Ace?” he asked,
staring at me piercingly with his bright blue eyes. I nodded, but I wasn’t really
listening. It wasn’t the first time he’s chewed me out. He finished his taco in two
bites and chugged his soda, put on his jacket, and left money for the waiter. “Now,
get out there and try not to kill anybody this time,” he said grumpily in his thick
Spanish accent, licking his greasy fingers as he stormed out. “Happy New Year to you
too, boss,” I said, but I wasn’t sure if he heard me. I finished my cheap coffee-‐water,
paid, and walked out. Happy New Year, indeed.
The streets were beginning to empty as I left the dinner. Soon, all that would be left would be the street cleanup crew, the bar hoppers, the degenerates, the desperate and lonely, the murderous, the insane; my kind of people. I hadn’t sat in my car for five seconds when my phone rang off. A text from Mary:
The new secretary was becoming all too familiar with me if she was texting me rather than using the intercom. As I wondered about what awaited me, I started the car and drove through the streets of New Miami. Honestly, it wasn’t that different from the old one. The Cuban-‐East American war may have killed a lot of people, but these buildings have withstood so many hurricanes. They still looked as old and decrepit as they ever have, but at least they stood. Stood long enough for some drunk forty something to piss all over their walls. I put on my siren to scare him. I hope his jeans are covered in piss now.
St. Nicholas church was an old recently closed building on 17th and Ogdawala Ave. The police lights were already shining and the tape stretched for an entire block. I walked up to the closest officer, a young kiss-‐ass named Limbent, and asked him to show me the crime scene. Like an overexcited dog, he lead me up the old stone steps and down the aisle. Photographers were already there snapping away at the victim. “I can’t remember the last time I was in here,” I told him as we approached. “Haven’t you ever been married, sir?” he asked like an excited pre-‐teen. He was in serious need of a slap. “Naw,” I brushed the question off.“Ever been in love, sir?” he continued, sarcastically making googly eyes. “Once or twice. This the only body?” I asked in front of the victim. “Only one we’ve seen so far. Yamaguchi is looking for anything else.” I bent down to look at her. Judging from the body, shewas about mid to late 20s. I say body because whoever murdered her ripped off her entire head.
Yamaguchi, unlike Limbent, was a very capable officer. She came up to my shoulders and had the slender figure of a former gymnast. Her dark green eyes complimented her serious face. Why she got a job working with these pigs and not a modeling gig, I’ll never now. “The only thing I could find was a demarked wall. Seems the perp left us a message,” she said in a serious voice. “Also, why haven’t you called me?” she asked inquisitively. She kissed me on the cheek when we were out of view. “Sorry, I’ve been busy,” I told her, lying. “Busy? Then what’s this I hear about you and the new receptionist?” she pressed on. “Who? Mary? Nothing,” also a lie. She followed it up with a long “sure.” I liked Yamaguchi, she was sexy and exciting, but I knew we would never work. We’d probably drive each other up the wall. Mary was more my speed, my type of woman. I tried to ease the tension. “Well, I’m glad to see that at least one competent cop is out here,” I said, hoping it worked. It did. “Yeah, Limbent can be such a drag. Always on about his wife this, his wife that.” “Did you know that half of the force has already fucked his wife?” I said with a laugh. “Hell, even I fucked his wife,” she said with a smile. I must have given her a look of surprise, because she followed up with “Christmas party two years ago. She’s got a nice ass for a mousy bookworm.” I gave her a sly grin. “Last summer at the team bonding picnic. You beat me to it,” I replied. We both laughed maliciously. Limbent, what a shmuck.
"Anyways, here it is,” she said, pointing at the wall. The perp had left a
graffiti message on the side of the wall. All it said was NIGHT VULTURE in hastily
written neon green letters. “I couldn’t find any cans, prints, anything. This guy was
pro,” she informed me. I stared at the words for a second; an ominous sign of things
to come? Another villain who wanted to play cat and mouse? Was this his calling
sign? All I knew is that I now had a new pain in the ass to deal with. Probably some
jerk with an ego problem or some sort of daddy issue. I went back to professional
mode. “Alright, let’s see what we can get on this guy,” I started.
Happy New Year, indeed.
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Part Two:
It’s Been a Rough Day
It’s Been a Rough Day
As I pulled
into the office, some ragged bum on a wooden box was shouting something in
Spanish. I could make out a few words: East Americans, atrocity, homeland, some
curse words. Most of the people just walked by and ignored him, but my buddy Henry
Laurentson watched him as he leaned on a wall nearby. “Don’t tell me you’re
actually listening to this crap?” I asked him with a laugh. “Are you kidding
me?” he responded in kind amidst the bum’s cursing.” This guy’s a riot. He really
thinks this land belongs to the Cubans.
Way better than television.” Henry was a detective like me, working
mostly in immigration and disappearance cases. He was only in his late
twenties, with smooth chocolate skin, a fashionable vest-pinstriped pants
combo, and most envious of all, the nicest pair of black and white self-tying Florsheims
that money could buy. His goatee was a little too thin, but his thick black
nearly pompadour-like hair more than made up for it. Unlike me, he was liked by
everyone in the department and his ambition helped him rise the ranks quickly.
He was, for all intents and purposes, my polar opposite. “He’s wrong. We’re
owned by the Chinese,” I told him as we heartily shook hands and laughed. “You
sure took your sweet ass time getting over here,” he told me. “I told Maldonado
that you had to help with a case.” “You’re a saint, you know that. A damn
saint,” I shouted to him as I walked towards the door. “Just buy me lunch,” he
shouted back over the bum’s screeching.
As I walked through the door, my eyes caught Mary. She was
on the phone, but she gave me one of her quick glorious smiles and I lit up
like an accidental fire in a fireworks factory. The feeling was short-lived. Maldonado
shouted “Detective Ace, get in here right now” angrily like one of those old
sitcom bosses. I entered his cluttered office. Pictures of his ex-wife and kids
hung on the wall next to certificates and plaques. On the table were some files
and a nearly overflowing ashtray. “Where the hell were you?” He asked angrily.
I tried to think of something quick; something that Henry had worked on
recently. “I was, um, helping with the Oldiva case,” I responded quickly. “Oh?
The Oldiva case, huh?” he responded, almost reaching critical mass. “You mean
the Oldiva case that was closed two days ago?” Just my luck they finish a case
on time. “Yes sir. They needed some patching up so I helped them,” I responded
unconvincingly. “ Detective Ace, I am so tired of listening to your bull. Everyday is the same…” I’ll spare you the
five minutes of chastising diatribe, but I was happy to get out of there with
just a slap on the wrist this time. As I walked towards my department, Julia,
another one of the secretaries, told me that a package was waiting for me in
the office.
The package
waiting for me in my office was small; no bigger than a baseball. It had no
return address and the address was written in type. Lacking the patience to
take it to get x-rayed, I opened it knowing fully well that it could have been
a bomb or some chemical agent or maybe even a poisonous spider. It was just a
single slip of paper rolled like a parchment. I checked to see if there was
anything else. Nothing. The parchment smelled of gasoline, probably to hide
fingerprints. I read it: 34-27-11. NV.
Shivers crawled down my spine as I realized that the numbers were the numbers
to the safe in my apartment, numbers that nobody but myself would know. I had
some cash, an extra badge and some legal documents in there, but nothing that
was irreplaceable. Still, the bastard had been in my house. Even if a person
knew the combination, they would have to know that it was hidden under a floorboard
in my closet. This guy calling himself the Night Vulture could have been
watching me sleep last night, or even worse, he could have stolen my good
liquor.
Later that evening, Mary, Henry, his husband known as
“Alonso the Artist,” and I went to eat at the nearby pizzeria known jokingly by
the force as “Joe’s Pizza-shit.” Everyone gave him a hard time about his
terrible cooking skills, but he always gave us discounts and Joe himself was a
good guy. He was a veteran of both the War of the Americas and the Cuban-East
American war. All over his restaurant stood pictures of him proudly posing with
a group of flyboys and his old love, “Death Claw,” his T-148 electric fighter
plane. Ask him about it and he’d tell you how the Death Claw was famous for
“never letting anyone escape alive once it had you in his grasp.” I had decided
not to tell Mary about the letter and ate pizza silently as Alonso the artist
talked about his new painting. He never made any money off of his paintings,
but somehow he found a way to dress up in the most ridiculously flamboyant and
expensive clothing. He probably did it to draw attention away from his pale
almost albino skin. He was tall, with thin dreads and big sunglasses that hid
his eyes. What Henry ever saw in him, I’ll never know, but Alonso did love him.
“It’s a new absurdist painting of George de la Marquisade, the new ambassador
of East America,” he was saying in the smug voice that all artists use.
"Absurdism is the new art form that is taking the country by storm, wouldn’t
you say Mr. Ace?” he asked as he looked in my direction. “Huh? Sure,” I replied
absent-mindedly. I couldn’t get that letter out of my thoughts. I tried to
remember anything in my apartment that had seemed out of place, but I couldn’t.
Alonso shook his head. “How did we ever let anyone so uncultured be our best
man?” he sighed jokingly. Mary laughed while Henry defended my honor. I tried
to pay attention, but phone rang and I was forced to go outside to take the
call.
The number
was one I had never seen before but that’s common in the force. Everyone was
always calling you from some random telephone. Still, after today’s scare, I
was nervous. “Yes, what is it?” I said irritably. “Hello sir.” It was Limbent.
“What do you want?” I asked impatiently. “Well sir, there’s been another one.
Another murder by this Night Vulture fella,” he responded. He gave me the
address: The Church of the Blessed Rose, not too far from New Ocean Drive. Writing it down, I quickly ran back in to
apologize to everyone for the sudden exit and ran to my car. The drive was
about thirty minutes but I made it there in fifteen. As I entered the church,
this all too familiar feeling of dejavu crept over me. Limbent was all business this time. “Sir, it’s
the same as last time. Head is missing just like the last one. The boys are
looking but haven’t found anything yet.” I patted him on the back. He had done
a good job. “Thanks Limbent, I’ll get right on it,” I told him as I walked to
the body.
As Limbent had said, the head was cut clean off. This new
victim was Black and wore the clothes typical of a religious woman: a long
skirt, gloves and a suit top which was open from initial inspection. The words
Night Vulture were written on her abdomen in sharpie. I guess the perp had seen
the obtuseness of spray-painting a huge message and opted for the quick
deposit. “Who else is here, Limbent?” I asked. “Well, sir, there’s Ignacio,
Burvont, Cheron and myself,” he replied. Yamaguchi wasn’t here sadly, but all
of them were capable cops, especially Burvont who has saved so many of our
backs. I always thought he was way overdue for a promotion, but he loved where
he was at and never took one. I walked around to see if there was anything
else. Nothing. This case was getting worse by the day and if the public heard
about it, we would be in deep trouble. Maldonado would have my ass on a platter
if I didn’t get something. We looked
desperately for any clues for about two and a half hours. Nothing still, so I
gave up. I had just walked to my car hopelessly when I noticed something on the
concrete floor. It was a few blotches of blood. I got on my knees and took a
closer look. They were fresh. My face beamed at the lucky break and I quickly
called the boys over. They couldn’t believe it. We took a few samples with
triumphant faces. This was it. This was the link that would help us find the
killer. Finally, we had somewhere to go.
What a string of luck. After all the meticulous planning that this guy had
done, how could he have made such a stupid mistake? The boys congratulated me
and I drove straight to the lab to get it analyzed.
The test
results didn’t come in until the next day. When I entered headquarters the
following day, Lee was already waiting for me by the entrance with a concerned
look. “Hey, you look like you’ve been busy. So do we got this guy or what?” I asked proudly. He looked toward the floor.
“We need to talk in private, Ace,” he said solemnly. My feelings of pride
washed away instantly. I wondered what
could have gone wrong as I followed him into the lab. We went into one of the
supply rooms. Lee was playing with his fingers nervously. “The results came in
and there were two different samples detected,” he started. “Go on,” I told
him. “The first sample is definitely of our victim, Ms. Lorenza Azida. But the
second sample,” he paused and sighed sadly “The second sample belongs to Mary,
the receptionist.”
Part Three:
I Hope You Didn’t Love Her
“Come
again?” I asked him incredulously. “The blood belongs to Mary Millard, the new
receptionist,” he repeated. I was speechless. It felt like a champion boxer had
just sucker punched me in the gut and took my wind out. “And you’re sure of
this?” I asked once more, refusing to believe it. “Yep, it was definitely her
blood,” Lee sadly stated. “I need a second to process this. Let me go grab a
coffee and I’ll be right back. Don’t do anything until I instruct you to do
so,” I told him as I walked out the door. My jittery hands were barely able to
turn the knob. As I walked out, Henry saw me. “Hey buddy, you look like you’ve
seen a ghost,” he said jokingly. “Yeah, something like that,” I replied glumly.
“I need a minute, man. Sorry,” I told him as I rushed by. I walked into the
break room. It was completely empty and I was glad it was. I regained my
composure. On the table stood a plastic bowl filled with baby carrots and
celery sticks. So much for the
stereotypical donuts of yore, I thought. I stood over the pot of coffee as
I watched it fill up, thinking to myself. Could it be that Mary, the woman I’ve
been seeing, the woman who has greeted me each morning…could it be that she was
the Night Vulture? It couldn’t be true. It just couldn’t be. All of a sudden,
two arms wrapped around me from behind; “Hello handsome,” whispered Mary. Chills crawled down my spine. I turned around
and faced her.
“Hi-, hi-, hi g-g-gorgeous,” I muttered nervously. Her
beautiful hazel eyes focused into mine.
“Are we still on for tonight?” she asked me in a sultry voice. I looked
around to see if anyone was watching through the windows. Nobody. She could
kill me right now. “Um, actually, Maldonado gave me another shift. I can’t make
it tonight,” I lied, regaining my composure. She looked disappointed. “Alright,
darling. I’ll be waiting at home for you,” she said, planting a quick kiss
before she walked away. She turned back to me when she reached the door. “Try
not to come home too late.” She left and once again I was alone to my thoughts.
I drank my coffee and walked back over to the lab. Lee was pacing frantically
back and forth. “There you are!” he shouted exasperatedly. “What are we gonna
do, man? What are we gonna do? I saw her exit the break room. The killer is
down the hall from us. She could strike again. She could be trying to kill one
of us.” “Calm down, Lee,” I said forcefully. He stopped pacing and looked at me
nervously. I rubbed my brow. “Listen, this is what we’ll do,” I started. “ I
will tail Mary for the day and see where she goes. Don’t say anything until I
tell you to, but have a phone handy. The blood may point to her, but we have no
way of knowing it was her, ok? I mean, I doubt Mary could drag a human body and
cut it’s head off so forcefully.” Lee nodded in agreement. “Let’s not get ahead
of ourselves. Stay close and wait for me to report anything unusual. If there
is any proof, even the tiniest shred, then we bag her,” I finished. “Alright,”
Lee responded with a little more optimism. We exchanged numbers and I waited
until Mary left.
The tail proved to be fruitless. She went to the
supermarket, the nail salon, and a department store before finally returning
back to my place. I waited for a few
hours but she didn’t go anywhere. I returned to headquarters for the case
review. Maldonado, Burvont, Limbent, Lee and Yamaguchi were already sitting in
the office conversing when I came here. “Well, if it isn’t the man of the
hour,” shouted Burvont sarcastically. Limbent and Yamaguchi both smiled while
Maldonado had his eternal scorn. I took
a seat without saying a word. “Ok, you dipshits, let’s hear what you got,”
Maldonado started unenthusiastically. All eyes were on me. I cleared my throat.
I told him about last night and that our only clue was the blood stains found
outside. “After a lab analysis, there were,” I hesitated, “…was one blood
sample detected and that was of the victim, sir.” Everyone looked downtrodden
believing that our biggest clue was for naught. Lee looked away and said nothing. There was a
minute of just silence before Maldonado blew up. "Well, that's just
fan-fucking-tastic,” shouted Maldonado. “What the hell am I supposed to tell the superiors? What will they think when they find out that this maniac has outsmarted us again?” he yelled frantically. I felt like crap. Maldonado marched right up to me until his face was an inch away from mine. “You listen here, Ace. If you don’t have anything on this guy by the end of the week, consider your ass canned,” he threatened. “But sir, it’s already Thursday,” interjected Limbent. Maldonado gave him an angry glare and Limbent quietly retracted his statement. “You got until the end of the week,” Maldonado repeated as he slammed the door. Three days until I got the axe. Great. I needed a smoke break.
fan-fucking-tastic,” shouted Maldonado. “What the hell am I supposed to tell the superiors? What will they think when they find out that this maniac has outsmarted us again?” he yelled frantically. I felt like crap. Maldonado marched right up to me until his face was an inch away from mine. “You listen here, Ace. If you don’t have anything on this guy by the end of the week, consider your ass canned,” he threatened. “But sir, it’s already Thursday,” interjected Limbent. Maldonado gave him an angry glare and Limbent quietly retracted his statement. “You got until the end of the week,” Maldonado repeated as he slammed the door. Three days until I got the axe. Great. I needed a smoke break.
The wind
was nice and cool outside. I sat on a park bench across the street from the
police station. A group of kids were playing hide and seek amongst the trees
around me while their parents watched. The sun was dipping into the horizon and
everyone was getting ready to leave. I
took a big puff and watched the smoke trail into the sky. Somewhere on the other side of the park, some
old man was playing John Coltrane’s “Naima” on his saxophone. He stood next to
a new statue of Horace Stillman, the inventor of the electric car. The statue
was of his portly body, wearing a Greek robe in a semi-serious manner and
carrying a wrench like a torch. On the base stood a plaque with the old saying
“Necessity is the mother of invention,” referring to how badly East America
suffered once they ran out of oil and how he swooped in and took advantage of a
bad situation. Those were dark times back then. They called it the second dark
ages and they were right. I still think that we haven’t fully escaped those
days, but it sure is much better now. I took another puff. I thought about all
of the day’s occurrences and the possibility of Mary as the Night Vulture.
Usually the perp would have left some unintentional evidence and would have been
bagged by now. The cigar smoke danced all around me. If Mary was truly the
night vulture, I was in danger. I
couldn’t stay at home. I put out my cigar.
As I
returned to the office, I ran into Yamaguchi. She was still in her police
uniform. “Hey, handsome. You doing alright?” she asked in a reassuring tone.
“Yeah, I’m alright,” I responded. “I’m just having some problems with Mary.
She’s back at home waiting for me, but I don’t feel like facing her. And then
this fucking case. I haven’t caught a break.” Yamaguchi embraced me tightly.
“Cheer up, man. It’ll get better,” she said. I thanked her and hugged her
tighter. She put her lips to my ear. “Of course, if you wanted to, you could
stay at my place,” she whispered as she kissed me on the cheek. When we let go,
I saw a mischievous look in her eyes. I thought about it for a second. I
couldn’t go home, and it was cheaper than a motel. “Sure, that sounds swell,” I
confirmed. A sly smile grew on her face. She clearly wasn’t planning on letting
me get much sleep tonight. “I’ll see you after work,” she said coolly. I
thanked her again and headed back to my office, wondering what tonight had in
store before my thoughts returned to my unpleasant future. I sat in my
comfortable chair and reminisced. I wondered if all the accolades and plaques
meant anything, all the drug ring busts and spy apprehensions. I was three days
away from being canned. Soon, it would all be worthless. After finishing up a
few write-ups on previous reports and checking for any similar cases to the
Night Vulture murders, I turned off the light, looked at my office at what very
well may be the last time and headed to Yamaguchi’s place.
Yamaguchi lived in a decent apartment
down in new Coco Plum. Coco Plum was once a fancy neighborhood for the nouveau
riche and entrepreneurs, but after it was destroyed during the wars, it was all
demolished and became a long collection of projects to house the refugees. Her
apartment was on the fifth floor. I knocked. There was some shuffling behind
the door and after two minutes, she answered it. She greeted me wearing a long
Miami Marlins t-shirt that showed off her tone, slender legs. She looked good
in a way that wasn’t even trying to be. “It’s good to see you haven’t forgotten
your way here,” she said with food in her mouth. She was holding a carton of
Ben and Jerry’s in her arm. “Well, who can forget?” I answered back. She
invited me in and I went straight for the couch, dead tired. It was almost one
in the morning. “Can I get you anything?” she asked as she put the carton away.
I took off my shoes and socks. “No thanks,” I responded. She walked over and
sat next to me as I took off my tie and made myself comfortable. “Hey, listen.
I know you’re having troubles with your new woman, but I want you to know that
I’m here for you,” she said, looking at me with soft eyes. It was the first
time today that I smiled. “Thanks, Yama, I needed that,” I told her. “Got a
spare toothbrush?” I asked her. She nodded and pointed to the bathroom and
showed me to it.
Her bathroom was no bigger than a
closet. As I brushed my teeth, I felt two arms wrap around me. Goosebumps ran
through me once again and I stopped for a second, remembering what happened
last time. Yamaguchi got on her tippy toes and kissed the back of my neck. I
turned around to face her with a feeling of caution. She had the most beautiful
smile and she was only wearing the thinnest of silk panties. She continued
kissing my neck, her arms caressing my chest. “Admit it, you missed me,” she
said seductively in between kisses. I spit out my toothpaste. “Maybe a little,”
I said as I wiped the runoff off of my face. Her smile grew and we kissed
passionately the way we used to back then. She jumped and wrapped her legs
around me. I supported her with one arm and turned off the lights with the
other. John Coltrane’s “Naima” from earlier played through my mind as we headed
for the moonlit bed. I let my worries go and let myself be taken by the tides
of passion.
I heard my
pants vibrate sometime in the morning and I pushed a still naked Yamaguchi off
of me. She looked peaceful, beautiful lying there. I really need to grow eyes on the back of my head so that beautiful
women won’t catch me off guard, I thought. The clock by her bedside
said seven thirty in the morning. I walked over to where my pants were lying
and I pulled out my cell phone. It was a text from Mary. All the thoughts of
the Night Vulture case returned instantly and the satisfaction of last night
was diminished. She was going to be pissed that I didn’t come home last night.
I opened the text. “Hope you didn’t love her. NV.” An instant feeling of dread
ran through me. “Oh fuck, oh fuck,” I shouted. Yamaguchi woke up. “What’s
wrong?” she asked in panic. I frantically put on my clothes. “The Night Vulture.
I just got a text message and it was from Mary’s phone,” I said hurriedly as I
put on my dress shirt. “Oh fuck,” she echoed and she quickly jumped out of bed.
She began to put on some clothes herself. “I’ll go with you, just in case,” she
said exasperatedly. “No, you go down to the station and get back up. It’s
better if I go alone, just in case.” I put on my shoes without socks and bolted
out the door. Damn it, I thought as I
peeled out of the parking lot, siren blazing.
The door to
my apartment was left open. I held a pistol that I kept in my glove
compartment. I took a deep breath, and kicked the door open, pistol pointed at
whatever waited on the other side. Nothing. “Mary? Mary?!?!” I shouted in
panic. I looked around and paused on the trail of blood that was coming out of
my bedroom. I rushed in without regard for my safety. There, lying on the bed,
was what remained of Mary. A naked headless torso clasping a small box, and the
words “Night Vulture” spray-painted in red on the wall behind the bed. I
dropped to my knees in shock. I was too late. I was ignorant and I had let the
woman in my life die at the hands of a madman.
I heard people rushing through the front door, the backup. Yamaguchi,
Burvont, Limbent, Henry and three or four others busted into my bedroom.
Yamaguchi gasped and Henry muttered “Oh my God,” covering his mouth in shock.
Everyone just stood there paralyzed, unable to process the scene before them.
Part Four:
Paint it in Blood
I woke up
the next day with the worst hangover of my life. The room around me was a hazy blur. It took
me a good ten minutes to realize that I was in my own office at headquarters.
Paper, plaques and bottles were thrown across the floor. The clock on the wall read 8:30 AM. It was
the first time I had ever come to work early. I groaned in pain. Why the fuck am I here? I thought as I
rubbed my brows. Someone in front of me cleared his throat. I didn’t even
realize this entire time that Maldonado was in the room with me. “It’s about
damn time,” he said in a tone that wasn’t as harsh as usual. It may have been the headache blurring my
vision, but I thought I saw the slightest of smiles. Not the happy kind, but
the sympathetic kind that someone uses to assure someone in grief, as if he was
glad I was alright. I wondered if I was hallucinating.
“Sir, before you fire me…” I started before he stopped me with a hand wave.
“Listen, clean this place up, wake up and then meet me by the park, alright?”
he asked. “Alright, boss,” I said with a struggle. He walked out of my office,
cautiously stepping around all the crap on the floor. I buzzed the front desk.
Margaret,
the new receptionist replacing Mary, brought me in a cup of strong coffee.
“Where should I put it down?” she asked in a lackluster tone that was nothing
like Mary’s wonderful voice. I pointed at desk next to the door. She put down
the coffee and she disappeared as quickly as she came in. I almost broke down
after she exited the room, but I maintained my composure. I cleaned my office
in thirty minutes and then went outside to meet the boss. I was prepared for
the worst, but I honestly wasn’t sure if I could take another blow. Maldonado was sitting at my bench in his
business casual attire, a red dress shirt with a black tie. When he saw me
approach, he scooted over to give me room.
He offered me a cigar and I took it, the puffs burning my alcohol and
coffee damaged throat. Was this how I was to be fired? I decided not to say a
word until he started. We stayed smoking for three minutes before he began. “Do
you know why I’m divorced, Ace?” he asked introspectively. I shook my head no.
“When I was just starting here, my
wife and I had an unplanned son. We were reckless and unprepared back then, and
having that kid early was our price to bear for our impatience. Regardless of
the difficulties he brought, I loved that boy and let me tell you, it was tough
at first. Maintaining a family and working a job that can kill you like nothing
for chicken feed, it was tough for us. We barely scraped by. When he was five, I took him to play catch in
the park. A friend of mine from the military academy, Derrick, passed by and I
turned my back for a minute to catch up with him quick. When I turn back around
to continue playing catch, my son was gone. I searched everywhere for him but
he disappeared without a trace. I reported it to my squad and had to do the
most difficult thing I had ever done; I had to tell my wife that I lost him.
She became hysterical. They gave her drugs
to calm down. I worked without any
rest, nearly passing out from lack of sleep, trying everything to find the
person who kidnapped my son. Two days later, we get a phone call. The asshole that
had him wanted a large ransom. I met them at a nearby park with cash. It was
there that I saw them, Derrick and his accomplice, some degenerate. It was a
setup. I was furious. He started talking about the old days, said that he had
been a Cuban spy and that he always hated me. Always wished he could kill me
because I was better than him in the military academy. I got the promotion he
wanted and he envied me. Later on, he went to jail for trying to steal military
equipment; equipment he could have stole easily if he had my position. I never
knew any of this. Only the top brass knew and they kept it quiet to avoid a
scandal. I never knew how I had wronged
this man, but I guess old grudges die hard. After years in jail, he found out
about where I lived, my family, my life, my son. He felt that the best revenge
was not to kill me, but to kill the thing I loved most. I begged for my son to
be released. He told me that he wanted the money. The bag was to be tossed when my son was
halfway between us. I followed the instructions. However, my old friend didn’t
care for honor and truth. He pulled a pistol out of his back pocket and shot my
boy. My instincts came out all of a sudden and I put a bullet through my
friend’s eyes and three more into his accomplice before my boy hit the floor. I
rushed over, picked him up and took him to the nearby hospital. He was hit in the arm and was bleeding all
over me. My wife met me there. I can still hear her screams when I remember it.
"Alan, Alan," over and over again. We watched as they operated on my son for
what seemed like forever. He came out alive, but his arm would be paralyzed
forever. I was just happy he was alive. My wife was not. Instead of the hero’s
congratulations, I was kicked out of my house because my job almost killed my
son. Five days later, she filed for divorce and never looked back. My son never
wrote and never forgave me. I haven’t seen either of them ever since.”
When Maldonado finished, he took a
big puff and let out the smoke really slowly in a long sigh. “Listen,” he
restarted. “I know this is difficult for you, and the next few days will be
hell, but you need to get this guy, Ace. I didn’t want what happened to Alan to
happen to…” he stopped before saying her name. “I know chief,” I said in
gratitude. “Which is why I should start right away,” I told him confidently. I
took another puff. “What about the three day ultimatum?” I asked him, trying to
get past the sentimental mood and back to work. “Forget it. Just please get
this son of a bitch,” he responded kindly. I took a big puff, watched the smoke
go up in the sky one last time, and put it out. I put a kind hand on my boss’
shoulder. “Thanks, boss. I’ll get this guy, I swear,” I told him in earnest. He
smiled. “Go get this bastard. I know you can,” he said, patting me on the back.
I nodded and ran back to headquarters, heading straight for the lab.
Lee was already looking at
something under the microscope. A body laid covered in a tarp, presumably
Mary’s body. “What do we got Lee?” I asked in a reinvigorated voice. “Good to
see you’re alright, detective,” he responded back. He looked at me with a smile. “You’ll be
happy to know that we actually have something to go on this time,” he told me
with a smirk. I was excited and asked him to continue. “Well, when the killer,”
he paused looking at the tarped body,” decapitated the victim, a miniscule
piece of the serrated saw edge he used was left in the corpse. It’s the type
left when a saw is first used, so this saw can’t be more than three days old.”
He walked over to a computer. “The saw edge was of a unique alloy used in
MIGHTY THOR tool products, and the only place its sold is in THE DIY STORE.” “But
there are at least five of these stores in the entire New Miami area, and
completely scattered,” I interjected in disappointment. Lee was not fazed.
“True, but only one is near the beach, and the sand particles found in your
bedroom could single that one out. I assume you haven’t been to the beach
lately?” he asked. I gave him a look that said, “are you kidding me?” He
continued. “Alright, so we have a DIY STORE in 5th and Hamilton that
matches that description. We also have what was left in the box. It was a
single piece of parchment like last time. It says:
“When the two sleeping
giants awaken, the vulture will strike again.”
I thought about it for a second.
Two sleeping giants? Who were the two
sleeping giants? “Alright Lee, anything else?” I asked. “That’s it so far,
Ace. I’ll let you know if I get anything else. Go follow that lead while it’s
still fresh. It’s the only one we got,” he told me. I thanked him and headed
for my car.
The DIY STORE was a large supply
store with anything you could ever want. I skimmed through their purchase
records, but there was nothing that caught my eye. I interviewed the manager to
see if he had seen anyone suspicious, but they were so busy that it was hard to
remember anyone. I thanked him and left with a list of recent customers.
Perhaps one of these would lead somewhere; criminal records, history of murder,
mental disorders. I was determined to get the list back to headquarters. It was
already almost lunchtime and I was starving. As I walked to my car, I noticed
someone squatting near it. There was a faint sound of tools being used. I
walked quietly to get a good view of the mystery person. To my surprise, it was
Alonso the artist. It looked like he was attaching something to my car. I took
out my pistol and walked towards him quietly, but he looked around in a
paranoid fashion and saw me before I could find cover. “Fuck,” he said
exasperatedly as he pulled out his own pistol and opened fire. I ducked behind
a car, two bullets shattering the window above me. He made a break for it.
“Stop, Alonso,” I shouted as I gave chase. He ran through the parking lot and
into a three-story office building nearby. As I burst through the door, I heard
two more gunshots whizz past me and a cacophony of screams and chaos ensued. A
stampede of people ran out the door, slowing my progress. Alonso ran up the
stairs onto the second floor.
I busted through the second floor
entrance to find a large hall of cubicles. Somewhere in here was Alonso. I
quietly sneaked from cubicle to cubicle searching for him. “He went that way,”
whispered a scared gentleman as he pointed me in the right direction. I thanked
him and continued forward. Just then, I heard his voice two rows down from me.
He was whispering to someone on a cellphone. “I failed,” he said. A brief
pause. “Well, what the fuck do you expect? I don’t know how to do that shit!
Why didn’t you get Yarma to do it? He likes killing people! I’m just one of the
distractions, remember?!” He was becoming more anxious. I was almost near him.
“Well, pick me up, damn it. Pick me the fuck up,” he shouted. I aimed my pistol
at him and fired. It hit him in the shoulder. He shouted in pain as I ran
towards him. He pulled a young female office worker that had previously been
out of view and pointed the gun at her. “If you take one more step, I’ll blow
her fucking brains out, you understand,” he said amidst grunts of pain. He
slowly shuffled towards the stairs on the other side of the room. As soon as he
walked through the door with the hostage, I quietly pursued him. At that
moment, I heard police sirens outside. It seemed like my friends had arrived. I
burst through the door and ran for the roof. I heard a gunshot and the female
coworker’s dead corpse fell towards me. I dodged it just in time and chased
Alonso through the rooftop door.
The helicopter flew next to the
ledge of building and a man was standing by the opened side door ready to help
Alonso up and make a quick getaway. He had light tan skin, thick black hair, a
medallion with a strange symbol on it, and, most striking of all, dark blood
red pupils. He held out his hand for Alonso as he hobbled to the chopper. I
pointed my gun and fired three quick rounds into his back. Alonso dropped to
the floor. The man in the chopper looked upset and signaled for the chopper to
leave. I took aim with the only two bullets left in the clip. One bullet struck
the side of the chopper. Although the second bullet seemed to hit the man in
the arm, it bounced off with a sharp clang as if it hit metal. The man smiled
maliciously. “You’re dealing with things bigger than yourself, detective,” he
shouted as the chopper pulled up. I tried to reload and fire again, but the
chopper was too far away by the time I was ready. I ran over to Alonso to see
if he was still alive, kicking his pistol out of reach in the process. He was
barely breathing. “Why did you do it, Alonso?” I asked him, cradling him in my
arms. He leaned toward my ear. “When the
two giants awaken, the vulture will strike again,” he rasped with strained
breath. “Who is the night vulture? Who is he?” I asked harshly. He didn’t
respond. I grabbed him by the collar and shook him violently. “Who is the damn
night vulture? Answer me, you stupid fuck,” I shouted in disdain. He smiled
sardonically as he breathed his last breath. I placed him down softly and
slammed my fist into the floor. My first major lead was dead and once again, I
was lost.
A few minutes after, the rooftop
door was thrust open as Henry, Yamaguchi, Limbent, and a few other officers
burst through. “Everything alright, Ace…” started Henry before his eyes spotted
Alonso. He gasped and ran over quickly, sliding next to his now dead
husband. Tears streamed from his face as
he cradled him in his arms. He looked at me, his eyes searching for an
explanation. I sighed and looked away. “Did he? Did he…” he started. “Yeah, he
did,” I confirmed. Henry dug his face
into Alonso’s chest with violent sobs. He kissed his lips and closed his eyes
with his hands. The rest of the force looked downtrodden. Burvont stepped
forward, clearing his throat to get my attention. “Sir, we’re going to secure
the perimeter, get the witnesses ready,” he paused as he looked down at Alonso,
“and call the coroner.” Henry sobbed harder. I gave him the go ahead and he
took off with everyone except Yamaguchi. Yamaguchi sat next to Henry and comforted
him. Henry still clutched onto Alonso tightly, his breaths strained with all
the mucus clogged up in his nose. I looked at the sight before me and then out
towards the sky where the helicopter had traveled. It had long since
disappeared into the fading afternoon sun. I looked back at the scene before
me. Another important death, and somewhere, a devil with red eyes was laughing.
Part Five:
In the Company of a
Psychopath
“A car
bomb?” asked Maldonado over my shoulder. “Yeah, a car bomb,” I answered him as
I continued to pour over the list from the DIY STORE. I entered the next name
into the criminal records database:
Carlos
Enfuentes… nothing
Derrick
Marsbark… nothing
Yai Sin Lao… nothing
I was drawing either blanks or scrubs not worth my
time. Maldonado paced around my office
while Yamaguchi worked on the second half of the list on a laptop. “And this
was the artist guy that was married to Henry?” he continued. “Yeah,” I answered
without taking my eyes off the screen.
Jorge Reyes
Loba… nothing
Jeffrey
Charleson… nothing
Desmond
Tulatoi… nothing
“And this Alonso wasn’t the night vulture?” he asked looking
over my shoulder again. I stopped for a second. “If he was, then he still had
accomplices, now are you gonna buzz in my ear all day or are you going to let
me do my damn job?” I said sarcastically. Maldonado smirked and said “Fine,
fine. I’ll just read your case report then, you pompous asshole.” That got a
laugh out of me. He left and closed the door. For a while, the only noise in
the office was the sound of typing and Yamaguchi’s muttered words as she read
the names to herself.
D’angelo
Clarkson… nothing
Eric
Bustamondo…
nothing
Mercutio Yarma…
…the name rang a bell. My eyes widened as I realized that Yarma was
the same name Alonso had mentioned on the phone. I pulled up the file. The man
was charged with theft, arson and first-degree murder in the past, but every
case was inconclusive and he was let go.
His mug shot was from his younger days, but he still had the look of a
murderer: light blue almost white eyes, peach fuzz on his face, a hairline that
was already starting to fade away and pale skin. He was only twenty-two in this
picture, but his eyes had the hard glare of someone from a rough background,
someone who liked to inflict pain on others. “I think we got our man,” I said as I turned
towards Yamaguchi with a smile.
The house attached to the address in the case report was an
old two story building in horse country near the Everglades. After the war, it
had been years since anyone had come back and claimed their properties out
here, but horse country was beginning to flourish again slowly but surely.
Looking at this house, the keyword was slowly. Moss covered the entire
building, making it seem more plant than house. Many of the walls were missing
pieces and it looked just about ready to collapse. The chief made Yamaguchi come with me as a precaution.
“There aren’t even any lights on,” she said. “Do you think anyone is actually
here?” I turned on my flashlight. “Doubt it, but got to be thorough,” I
answered. She followed silently behind me as I climbed up the stairs of the
front porch. The second step collapsed under my weight and let out a loud crack.
Yamaguchi shook her head, as if to say “nice going, dumbass.” I picked myself
up and progressed lightly, trying not to make the wooden floor creak. The door
itself sounded like it hadn’t been opened for a thousand years. The loud creak
would have alerted a deaf person. This is why I chose to be a cop and not a
spy. At this point, I threw caution to the wind and quickly walked into the
living room. It was empty except for an old television, a couch and a dinner
table. Rats scurried as I used my flashlight to look around. The kitchen was just
as bare, except for some cans in the cabinets and expired mayonnaise in the
fridge. The downstairs bathroom smelled rancid and the neighboring closet held
only a moth eaten fur coat. The coat was about my size. Yamaguchi didn’t find
anything either. We headed up the stairs
to see if the rooms held anything.
As I
climbed up the stairs, I heard a skittering noise behind the first door. I
opened it to reveal a small bedroom. Three raccoons scurried out through a hole
in the window. The room itself was the stuff of nightmares. The walls were
covered in pictures of naked women, most of which had scars, blood or weapons
drawn on them, as if to make it seem like they were killed. Most of the
pictures were pulled out of magazines, but the occasional one was from a
camera. “Holy shit,” remarked Yamaguchi upon seeing the Sistine Chapel of
passive aggressive murder. The bed had a thick black comforter on it covered
with dust. In a corner, an old filthy Mac desktop and some pictures were
sitting on a desk; relics of the past. The pictures showed a young couple with
their son, who looked just like Mercutio Yarma. Over the mother, the word WHORE
was written in permanent marker. The father was unmarked. “Come look at this,
Yama,” I called her as she put down a toy car she was looking at. She came to
my side and I showed her the picture. “That little kid definitely looks like
our killer. He looks evil even there,” she replied, pointing out the child’s
awkward grin. The other picture was just of Yarma and his mother, both a few
years older. Again, the word WHORE was written over her. “This guy really hates
his mother,” Yamaguchi said, placing the picture frame down softly. Suddenly,
the door sealed shut, the once quiet Mac buzzed to life and Yarma himself appeared on the
screen. Yamaguchi and I jumped back in shock and she clinged to my arm
nervously. “Welcome to the last day of your life,” he said in a raspy voice.
Yarma appeared to be in his late forties, early fifties. He was completely bald
now, with yellow stained teeth and wrinkled skin, but he still had the same
piercing light blue eyes. “Clearly, that idiot’s incompetence led you to this
place, but in a way I’m glad, because I haven’t had any personal playthings in
months,” he continued. He let out a dry hacky cough. “You’re going to pay, you
stupid belligerent fuck,” I said hard and menacingly at the camera on the
desktop. He laughed. “We’ll see about that, detective,” he said as a hidden
compartment on the Mac opened up and sprayed a thick mist into the room.
Everything became dim. It was some form of knockout gas. An attempt to exit the room was hopeless, as the door would not budge. Yamaguchi, still
clinging to my arm, began to fall. I tried to help her up but I also dropped. I
lost consciousness and drifted into darkness.
When I
awoke, I had no sense of how much time had passed. Slowly my eyes opened and
revealed a dimly lit room. It looked like something out of a Frankenstein
movie. It was a long room, with a giant desk covered with various beakers
filled with chemicals and sharp cutting instruments. Saws, swords, knives,
axes, and everything in between hung from hooks on the table, most covered in
what I assumed was blood. Also on the table was a human head, a young white
blonde female whose skin had already shriveled to the point of beyond
recognition. The head’s eyes had been
ripped out and placed in a jar next to it. I tried moving, but realized that I
was chained to a table against the wall. I couldn’t budge. The chains were so
tight that they almost cut off my circulation. Next to me was Yamaguchi, still
unconscious. On the other side of the room, a man who I could only assume was
Yarma was facing away from me pulling something out of a cabinet. He faced me
and confirmed my suspicions. “Oh, excellent, you’re awake. Now the fun can
begin,” he shouted excitedly as he approached me. Yarma had a strange gait that
seemed to be due to one leg being longer than the other. He came up to my chin
in height. I know this because he came up close and licked my neck. My skin
crawled. Clearly this man had lost his sanity a long time ago. “Oh, your flesh tastes divine,” he whispered
ominously. “I normally don’t kill men, but it seems that tonight I’ll make the
rare exception.” He pulled a small blade out of his lab coat. “Now, how to kill
you,” he pondered as he pressed the blade to my forearm. “Should I cut you to
pieces?” he said, making a small gash on my arm.
I tried my best not to wince
and give him the pleasure. “Should I let you bleed out?” he continued, putting
another gash below the first one. My blood was dripping to the floor. “Should I
let you starve to death? Maybe poison your food?” I didn’t match his excited
gaze and he walked towards Yamaguchi. “Maybe I should rape the woman? Kill her
first,” he said with a smirk. It got to me. “You fucking bastard,” I said between
gritted teeth. He laughed. “It looks
like we have a winner,” he said, followed by a dry cough. He approached
Yamaguchi and used the blade to cut the buttons on her uniform, exposing her
chest. “Oh, she looks nice and supple,” he said, cutting her bra and cupping
her left breast. She groaned. “Leave her alone,” I pleaded. “Do what you want
with me but leave her alone,” I shouted.
“Oh my, what a gentleman,” he said, his voice
more raspy. “How honorable of you. I am
very impressed. Maldonado was right about you,” he said with a menacing grin
that would scare the Grinch. I dropped my jaw in shock. Maldonado? Was
Maldonado behind this scheme the entire time? Had he led me on and left me a
sucker? Yarma enjoyed my misery and made another gash on my face, deeper than
the first two. A grunt of pain escaped me. Warm blood trickled down my face and
I was beginning to feel light headed. “Look at me, I’ve said to much,” he said
rapidly as he twisted a lever on the side of the table, placing it in the
horizontal position. “I’m going to get rid of you quick. Then I’ll rape your
little girlfriend over here. Over. And over. And over,” he said, emphasizing
the last words. The table had wheels
underneath and he wheeled me over to a marked area on the floor. Above me was a
metal contraption that looked like one half of those spike-filled coffins
magicians used in their act. It was clearly meant to drop down on me, turning
me into Swiss cheese. “Then I’m going to
cut her fucking head off. Just like daddy taught me,” he said laughing and
coughing. I looked at Yamaguchi, knowing
that it was all over. I had failed to capture the night vulture. I let
Maldonado fool me into a trap. I let this madman win, free to capture and kill
all the people who meant something to me. I failed. Yarma walked over to a
lever next to the door. “I’ll see you in hell, you bastard,” I screamed at him,
trying not to give him the satisfaction.
He
laughed. “And I’ll be running it. The Devil knows no worse than I,” he
retaliated excitedly.
I closed my eyes and prepared for
death. I’m sorry everyone. I failed I
thought, ready for my last few seconds of life.
Just then, the door next to Yarma
opened with a loud crash, knocking Yarma to the floor. In ran none other than
Henry, gun cocked and scanning the room quickly before noticing Yamaguchi on
the wall in front of him. “Henry, to your right,” I screamed as Yarma got up
quickly to pull down the lever. Henry saw him and fired point blank right
between the eyes, but it was too late. Yarma had pulled the lever. The spikes
came hurtling down towards me. I was a goner…or so I thought. The spiked
ceiling stopped centimeters in front of me, one of the spikes barely grazing the
tip of my nose. Then the spiked ceiling slowly moved back up. I looked up and
realized what had happened. Henry had grabbed Yarma’s hand and the lever and
had prevented it from being fully pulled down. I was saved. “Holy shit, that was amazing,” I screamed
amidst laughs of relief. Henry also laughed. “You’re a magnificent son of a
bitch,” I yelled, full of adrenaline and joy. “And you’re one lucky son of a
bitch,” he said, walking over to me. He released me from the table by grabbing
a nearby saw and sawing my chains off. Afterwards, we released a still
unconscious Yamaguchi from her chains and I cradled her in my arms. “How the
hell did you find us?” I asked him. “Well, I was feeling like I wanted some
revenge, and then Maldonado told me about how you had this lead. I was restless
so I decided to meet y’all here. It’s a good thing too ‘cuz I heard you
screaming and came down here,” he explained. The mention of Maldonado instantly
erased my relief and a feeling of anger washed over me. “Maldonado,” I said
angrily, giving Yamaguchi to Henry as I looked for something to use as a tourniquet
for my injuries. “What’s wrong?” he asked, surprised by my sudden reaction. I
found some bandages and hastily wrapped up my cuts. It would do. “Yarma
mentioned Maldonado. Says he’s part of this ordeal,” I explained. “No shit,” he
replied in shock. We left Yarma’s corpse there and headed out of the room and
up a flight of stairs. The stairs had been hidden under a rug in the kitchen.
Entering the familiar territory, we ran over to our cars and floored it to
Maldonado’s apartment.
Maldonado’s apartment was in a
cheap cozy inn in the neighborhood next to headquarters. We had gone there in
the past for the occasional poker game, but this time, his chips were down and
we were sweeping house. We left
Yamaguchi in the car, wrapped up in my jacket. Walking quietly, Henry and I
approached room 307, whispering our strategy. I would break down the door and
Henry was to follow. When we got to the door, I kicked it in and immediately
rushed in. The living room was empty but I heard a “What the hell?” come out of
the bedroom. I kicked the bedroom door open as well and pointed my pistol at
Maldonado. He was in his pajamas, sitting in bed reading a novel. “What is the
meaning of this?” he asked in shock. “Don’t play games with me, you old dick.
You lead me on this wild goose chase and almost got me killed and you’re going
to play dumb? Yarma told me you’re a part of this,” I explained angrily. Maldonado
rose out of bed slowly. Henry and I kept our guns on him. “Don’t try anything,
old man,” Henry shouted. Maldonado crossed his arms and looked directly at me.
“If you really think I did it, then go ahead and shoot me,” he said. Tears
streamed down his face. “If you really think I did it, then fucking shoot me
already,” he shouted. I hesitated.
“Don’t fall for this crap, Ace,” shouted Henry. “He led to the death of
Alonso. My Alonso. Not to mention Mary,” Henry continued. The mention of her
name made me refocus on him. Maldonado got on his knees. “Just fucking kill me
then. Kill me now,” he screamed, staring right into my eyes. He closed them and
leaned his head down, ready for death. As he did so, something caught my eye
and I dropped my gun. My mouth gaped wide out and I let of a small gasp. The
picture frame on his bedside table. The picture was of his family. His wife,
his son and him. His son was what caught my attention. His son had red eyes.
Part Six:
If We Go Down, Let It
Be Gloriously In Flames
I walked
over to the picture and picked it up as Maldonado and Henry watched in
confusion. There was no doubt about it.
The red eyes, the thick hair, all the same. The kid in the picture was
the same man who was in the helicopter that day. Alan Maldonado. In the
picture, which I imagine was pre-divorce; Alan had the bright smile of a child
oblivious to the world’s problems. He couldn’t have been older than six or
seven. How the times had changed. I turned around and explained the situation
to Maldonado and Henry. Maldonado’s skin turned pale as he sat on the bed for
support. Henry muttered “holy shit,” shaking his head in disbelief. “Are you
sure? My son? It was my Alan?” stammered Maldonado. “It was him. I’ll never
forget those eyes,” I told him sadly. Maldonado appeared to gain fifty years of
age all of a sudden as I confirmed it. “Alright,” was all he could say. “Get some sleep, boss. We’ll see what we can
do,” said Henry, helping the boss lie down. “Alright,” he said, even weaker then
before. I felt bad for Maldonado. What was once supposed to be his legacy, his
gift to the world, the child created in his image became an ugly distorted
nightmare that could not be any farther from what his father was. We said our
goodbyes and left Maldonado lying there. We closed what was left of the door
and walked outside. In the elevator, Henry and I stood in silence, still trying
to process the entire night that had just passed. The sun was already shining through
the front door of the lobby as we opened it.
“Are we going to the office?” Henry
asked as we walked towards the parking lot. “I guess we should probably drop
Yamaguchi home fir…” I didn’t finish my sentence. From the other end of the parking
lot, I saw that the car was missing, Yamaguchi and all. I ran over to the spot
and looked around. There was no doubt about it. It was gone. Henry caught up,
also realizing it. “Damn, it’s just one thing after another,” he said in
anguish. I looked around the parking lot. Nothing. “Ace, come check this out,”
said Henry hurriedly. Lying where our car had been was a box similar to the one
I received a few days ago. This one was made of metal. I opened it to reveal a
cell phone. The cell phone rang as I picked it up out of the box. I answered
it. “Yeah?” I asked impatiently. The person on the other line took a few
seconds before it spoke. “Hello, detective,” said the modulated voice on the
other line. It had a cold tone to it. I listened impatiently as Henry looked
on. “Detective, we must converse in private. We have a mutual enemy and I have
a proposition,” said the voice.
“What did you do with Yamaguchi?” I shouted
into the phone.
The voice laughed. “Do you really think I had anything to do
with that woman? You’re more clueless than I thought,” said the voice mockingly. The voice was pissing me off.
“Don’t fuck
with me, asshole. Where is Yamaguchi?”
There was a few more seconds of silence.
“Meet me on the bow of the Majestic cruise ship coming in tonight at ten thirty
PM. Come alone, but come armed.” The voice hung up. I threw the phone at the
ground in rage. “What did he say?” asked Henry. “Nothing much,” I responded.
“We need to find Yamaguchi. And pray that she is alive.”
I called headquarters for a backup
car on my cell phone while Henry called for someone to use the electronic
tracer to find the police car Yamaguchi had been in. The car had been
pinpointed to a back end street near Miccosukee town, the seedy gambling town
in Kendall. We were picked up by Limbent, looking his usual nerdy self. “Long
night, gentleman?” he asked with a chuckle. “Not now, Limbent,” I said. “As sad
as it is to admit, even you are a sight for sore eyes, Limbent,” said Henry. We
all laughed. “Gee, thanks,” Limbent said, rolling his eyes and pulling out into
the street. “Burvont and Cortez are already on their way to the location,”
Limbent continued. We sat there in silence. Limbent continued. “Miccosukee
land, huh? Last time I was there my wife almost gambled away our life savings. Talk
about gold diggers, am I right?” Silence. Limbent grumbled, gave up and turned
on the radio, some nice smooth jazz. Slowly but surely, my eyes grew heavy and
I slept for the rest of the trip, tired from the last few days of action. I was
awoken by the force of the car stopping. “You passed the fuck out,” laughed
Henry. “Don’t pick on the detective. He’s had a long night,” said Limbent in a
baby voice. “I rubbed my eyes. “Both of you, shut the hell up,” I said. We got
out of the car and walked over to the location of the stolen vehicle. Burvont
and Cortez were already looking around it. Or what was left of it. The Car had
crashed through a light pole and straight into a building. In the front seat
sat a dead Caucasian male, eyes wide open with a look of shock. His neck was
snapped. Burvont walked over to me. “You gotta give officer Yamaguchi credit.
She is one tough woman,” he said. “You don’t know the half of it,” I started. “One
time before in the Alcarone case, she was kidnapped by two hoodlums and kept in
their garden shack as ransom. She got free, knocked out one, and literally cut
off the balls of the other,” I told him. He winced. “Damn, really?” he asked. I
nodded. “He shouldn’t have threatened her with garden shears,” I said with a laugh.
I looked at the scene of chaos before me, wondering where she was right now. I
asked Burvont what he was able to get out of this mess.
“Well,” he started, “from what I see in the
car, namely, the scratches in the rear, the two bullet holes on the back seat,
broken guy’s neck, the fluff on the floor and the broken door handle, I would
say that Officer Yamaguchi woke up, realized she was kidnapped, snapped the
driver’s neck…” Burvont cleared his dry voice from talking so much without
taking a breath. He restarted.“…The driver clearly had some kind of accomplice.
The accomplice tried to shoot Officer Yamaguchi, but she pointed the gun away
and the guy shot two in the backseat before Yamaguchi was able to knock it out
of his hand.” Burvont walked over to the hood of the destroyed car and pulled
up a plastic zip lock bag that had the weapon inside, an old six-shooter. “This
was the weapon in question. Bullets matched the gun,” he continued. He walked
over back to me. “Now this is where it gets hazy. My guess is the car crashes,
everyone is shaken, and somehow the guy takes advantage to jump in the back and
get Officer Yamaguchi under control, forcing her to come with him somehow,”
finished Burvont. I sat that in amazement at Burvont’s skill. He definitely
earned the title of “master of evidence.” “Alright, have you asked around about
their whereabouts? I would guess a nearly topless Asian woman screaming at the
top of her lungs wouldn’t be a sight to miss,” I asked. He shook his head. “Cortez
has asked a few, but nobody complies or claims to have seen anything.”
“Fantastic,” I responded with fatigue, checking my watch. It was still only ten
in the morning; Plenty of time before my date tonight.
The rest of the day was full of busybody work that got us nowhere. We checked a few of the local areas but found nothing. I interviewed a few people, but nothing concrete. One man said that he heard the crash around four in the morning but that the driver was already gone by the time he got there. He was hesitant to comply; I had to coerce the information out of him. Miccosukee town had that effect. Mess with the wrong people and you could wind up as chunks of meat in someone’s dumpster. The woman who phoned it in said she saw a male walk away from the car with a large briefcase. Besides the fact that the male was wearing a suit and was African American, she could not give any other features. I believed her since she could be one hundred years old. Lunch, some more house searches, and scarce forensic evidence; we found no trace of where the mystery man went with Yamaguchi.
The rest of the day was full of busybody work that got us nowhere. We checked a few of the local areas but found nothing. I interviewed a few people, but nothing concrete. One man said that he heard the crash around four in the morning but that the driver was already gone by the time he got there. He was hesitant to comply; I had to coerce the information out of him. Miccosukee town had that effect. Mess with the wrong people and you could wind up as chunks of meat in someone’s dumpster. The woman who phoned it in said she saw a male walk away from the car with a large briefcase. Besides the fact that the male was wearing a suit and was African American, she could not give any other features. I believed her since she could be one hundred years old. Lunch, some more house searches, and scarce forensic evidence; we found no trace of where the mystery man went with Yamaguchi.
Before I knew it, it was already eight fifteen
at night and I had to drive to the other side of New Miami. “You sure you don’t
want me to go with you?” Henry asked as he put an electronic cigarette in his
mouth. “Naw, I’m fine. It’s better if I don’t spook this Night Vulture person,”
I responded. “Alright, I’ll keep
looking. You watch your ass because I won’t be there to bust you out this time,”
he said with a laugh. I shook his hand. “I will. Find her, will ya?” I said as
I closed the door. Henry smiled and saw me off. I drove all the way to where
the cruise ships stopped. Was I going to meet the Night Vulture? Alan
Maldonado? Were they the same person? I put a few extra clips in my pocket and
walked to the loading platform of the Majestic. Strangely, there was no one
guarding it. I didn’t have a good feeling about this. The entire ship was
eerily silent, a big empty space that not even a few hours ago was full of life
and cheer. Now, it was just a floating coffin. Perhaps my own.
After climbing the stairs and
reaching the main deck, I headed towards the bow of the ship. Standing at the
corner was some person in a trench coat. I pointed my pistol at the mystery
person. The person didn’t move as I walked closer. “Alright, what’s this all
about and where’s Yamaguchi?” I said authoritatively. “Is that any way to greet
an old flame?” she said as she turned around. It was Persephone Kalena, my
ex-girlfriend. She still looked the same as when I dated her ten years ago;
Long flowing black hair, mocha skin, golden eyes, and big luscious lips. She
had gained a little weight but she still had her very sensual curves. As she
walked over to me, the sound of her heels were the only thing breaking the silence
of seeing my former love again after so long. I put my gun in its holster. She
stopped within inches of me, our eyes never leaving each other’s forlorn gaze.
Long ago, I had loved this woman with all my heart. Had she not turned out to
be a Cuban spy, I would have married her. And yet here she was, a ghost from
the past. “It’s been a while, mi amor,” she said softly. It gave me goosebumps.
Never had those two words meant anything until she said it. Even now, they
still retained their power. “What’s going on, Persephone? I have a friend in
danger, people being murdered left and right and you’re somehow caught in on
this mess? Why?” I asked anxiously. She wrapped her arms around me and dug her
face into my chest. “Trust me when I say I had nothing to do with any of it,”
she said sadly. She grabbed my hand and walked me to the bow. “The only thing I
have done is left those clues for you. The two boxes were from me. I was trying
to help you out. Trying to stay anonymous, but…” she faded. “But?” I asked. She
sighed heavily, holding back tears. “Mi amor, I may be in danger. The people I
work…” she choked up a little. “The people I work for want to kill me for
helping you.”
I stood there silent, not knowing
what to say. She looked out into the ocean. “They found out I was helping you.
I’m really scared.” “Who are they?” I asked. “It’s the…” she didn’t get to
finish the sentence because we heard the sound of footsteps running to our
location. We took cover behind a nearby lifeboat and saw them. A group of at least
twenty men, all dressed in black, firing machine guns and pistols. Bullets
bounced all around us. “Fuck, get down,” I shouted, trying to return fire;
there were so many bullets that I couldn’t. Fuck,
we’re screwed, I thought. All of sudden, Persephone pulled something out of
her trench coat pocket. It was a handful of grenades. I looked at her with a
smirk of joy. “I hope this works,” she said. We pulled the pins, tossed the
grenades overhead and made a dash for it. I shot two of the assassins standing in
our way while the grenades exploded, causing enough chaos to get a clear run
across the deck to the loading platform. It looked like we were home clear
until out of nowhere, a rocket shell blew up our only escape. The blast was
large and knocked us on our feet. When I got up, I saw the attacker standing on
the dock, rocket launcher held causally over his shoulder. It was Alan. “You
ain’t going anywhere, detective,” he said in his thick Spanish accent. “And you
can take your puta with you.” He laughed as he stepped into a car parked next
to him. I took a few useless shots at him in rage, but I missed. The car sped
up as bullets crashed just above my head. It seemed that not all of our
pursuers had been killed. “Damn it,” said Persephone angrily. She pulled out a
small machine gun and returned fire. Two of our attackers fell, but it seemed
that many more were coming. Knowing we’d be overwhelmed, I grabbed Persephone
by the hand and we made a break for it. We ran onto the ship; running past
the fancy lobby with the chandeliers and into the shopping area. The walls were
lined with overpriced stores and crappy looking display kiosks. Knowing that her heels would do us no justice in running, we stopped and prepared to face them.
Kicking over one of the dining
tables to use as cover, Persephone and I shot at our pursuers. There were at least fifteen of them left, all
lined to the teeth with machine gun ammo. “Any more grenades?” I asked, firing
my pistol and hitting one man in the forehead after four shots. “Sorry, my
Love, but that was all I had,” she said, shooting one in the leg and another in
the neck with a broad sweep of her machine gun. We continued to kick tables and
make our way back. The man who I assume was the leader signaled for a few of
them to go around. They were going to flank us from the other side and we would
be fucked when they did. I lifted from behind cover to fire again, but a bullet
caught me in the top of the shoulder. I fell to the floor and let out a loud
scream. Persephone gasped and rushed to my side. “Mi amor, mi amor,” she said
worriedly as she continued to return fire,” Mi amor, are you alright?” I pulled
a cigar out of my pocket and lit it. Blood soaked the sleeve of my dress shirt,
but it wasn’t as bad as it looked. “Persephone, if I’m going to die tonight,
I’m glad that at least I got to see you one last time,” I said struggling. She
smiled. The same smile that I cherished all those years ago. I reloaded my gun
and returned fire. Ten shots and I took down three while Persephone took down
another two. The group that had gone around to flank us finally started to fire
from the other side, forcing us to kick another dining table down to provide
full cover, a circular fort of tables. I was down to my last clip and bullets
danced all around us. Five thugs on my right, three on my left. Twenty bullets
in the chamber. I looked at Persephone, the beautiful phantom who had eluded me
all these years, the only woman I had ever loved, machine gun in hand. We nodded
to each other and rose to make our last stand.
Part Seven:
Yamaguchi in Third Person
Yamaguchi
failed to see anything in the large duffle bag into which she was stuffed forcefully;
her hands and feet bound by duct tape. A tiny sliver of light poked through the
slightly ajar zipper, but that was about it. She felt blood slowly crawl across
her entire face, soaking the duct tape gag that covered her mouth. She wondered
if she was blind. A massive headache and the little breathing room caused her
distress and she shook her container. Someone punched the side of the duffle
bag into her abdomen and shouted, “calm down, woman” in a deep voice. Yamaguchi felt pain all over and that punch
didn’t help. She tried to remember the most recent series of events, but it was
all blurs.
All of them were isolated incidents surrounded by black.
Damn, my fucking skull
feels like it’s going to explode, she thought.
Her captor was a muscular black man
with a rugged face. He had a short black haircut with white streaks on the
side, the haircut of a man beginning to accept his age with grace. He wore a
perfectly kept dress shirt and tie that failed to contain his bulging muscles.
“Damn, this woman was a hassle,” he said to someone out of view. The man
grabbed Yamaguchi by the cuff of her shirt and
pulled her out. Yamaguchi took in her surroundings. It was a large wooden room
that contained various tall metal cabinets, a table or two and large open
windows. It appeared to be a log cabin of some sort. There was only one other
man in the room, the one to which the captor had spoken to. He had a redneck
appearance to him: cut sleeves, messy hair hidden by a trucker hat, stained
jeans and a five o’ clock shadow. “You know, I don’t usually like Squints but I
could definitely put a bag over her head and pretend she was white,” said the new
man, licking his lips in a manner that was disturbing to Yamaguchi.
“No rape,” said the muscular man,
slinging Yamaguchi over his shoulder and bringing her to the chair. “Aw, c’mon
boss, why does it matter?” he whined. Muscle man glared at him hard. “We are an
organization of professionals. We do not rape,” he said with a tinge of anger.
The new man was silenced and looked down bitterly. “Now, are you going to help
me out or not?” added muscle man, making the new man spring to attention. They
tied Yamaguchi’s arms and legs to a chair with rope, cleaned the blood off her
face and replaced her duct taped gag with a ball gag.
“Fuck you, assholes. When
my friends…” she shouted during the exchange, the forceful placement of the
ball gag interrupting her sentence. Yamaguchi tried to struggle but the captor
slapped her hard across the face. “You don’t learn, do you?” he said angrily.
Yamaguchi stood still. She looked around the room and thought of ways to free
herself. There was a letter opener on the desk across the room, a broken
cabinet handle to her right and a bunch of fishing poles with fish hooks to her
left, but the question was how to cut herself free from her rope bonds without
being seen, without attracting attention. The two men conversed in front of
her. “Keep her here until the boss gets back, and if anything happens to her,
so help me God I will rip out your spine, do you understand?” said the captor.
“Yes,” stammered the redneck, scared of the much more physically superior
captor. Muscle man looked at Yamaguchi one more time and grunted before
storming out of the room. The other man closed the door behind him and walked
over to the desk, turning on a portable radio.
The man
adjusted the knobs of the radio as Yamaguchi continued to struggle with her
bonds quietly. The rope on my right foot
is loose. If I can get it off, I should be able to slip it out, she thought
as the radio came into focus. She pushed her shoe off and difficultly slipped
her foot through the rope. “…and that is
how the market was today. In political news, interim Cuban leader Jose Cardonez
has come out against the actions of political rival Arios Anguilin, stating
that his actions are that of a guerilla fighter and that he is no better than a
terrorist. Anguilin has quickly been gaining popularity, a sign which
Ambassador Marquisade has called troubling…” At the mention of the
ambassador’s name, the man said “Marquisade” in spite. He spit on the ground
and then turned toward Yamaguchi. Yamaguchi hid her leg close to the rope,
trying to conceal its liberation. The man got up from his chair and walked
toward her. “You know,” he started, “You’re actually kinda cute for a squint.
You got a nice rack there.” As he walked closer and closer, Yamaguchi worried
about what he might do. “I know the boss said not to fuck you and to be a
gentleman and all that shit,” he licked his lips, “but it don’t mean I can’t
have any fun.” He reached out and grabbed her breasts, fondling them hard.
Yamaguchi stood there silently, seething at the man’s
perversion. He looked her in the eyes. “You sure do have a nice pair, and such
pretty eyes,” he said with a malicious grin. Yamaguchi realized that this was
her chance.
Leaning her
head back as far as it would go, Yamaguchi, forcing her head forward, head-butted the man as hard as she could. The man screamed in pain and fell
to the floor on his back. Using the heel of her freed foot, she raised her leg
up and quickly struck as hard as she could on his Adam’s apple. She brought her leg up again and hit the man
in the side of the head, so quick that he couldn’t roll away. She stomped his
face over and over again, the anger of being violated fueling her blows. The
man was in too much pain to scream, the radio concealing his groans. She
brought it up one last time, hit him again with everything she had, and knocked
the man out. He laid on the floor groaning as a pool of blood trickled from his
nose and ear, the radio drowning out the noise.
Yamaguchi ignored the pain in her head and moved the chair
toward the cabinet. Using the broken handle, she was able to cut the ropes and
free her hands. I ought to kill this
bastard, she thought as she removed her ball gag. Once free, she hastily
used the ropes to tie the man. It’ll slow
him down at least, she thought. She looked around for any items she could
use to escape. There was the letter opener, which Yamaguchi took. Feeling
exposed, Yamaguchi looked for something to wear and found a thick fisherman’s
vest in one of the cabinets. There were no firearms in the room, so Yamaguchi
had to improvise. She found a fishnet in one corner of the room and broke it’s
handle, creating a makeshift club. Yamaguchi held the knife and club with one
hand and looked around to see if she could swipe anything else. She also
grabbed a shiny paperweight off the desk. This’ll
have to do, she thought as she wrapped some wire around her shoulder and
placed the paperweight in her pocket. Yamaguchi took one last look at the man
lying there before opening the door. Fucking
asshole, she thought.
Once
Yamaguchi opened the door, she realized where she was. Great, the Everglades, she thought as the scene before her
unfolded. The door opened up to a small makeshift wooden bridge built so that
people wouldn’t have to wade through the swamp. She quietly closed the door and
crept along the length of the bridge, which connected to another log cabin, a
much larger one consisting of a rectangular hallway and some rooms. Grasping
the paperweight in her hand, she opened the door ever so slightly and used its
reflective properties to see if anyone waited around the corner. Nobody. She
continued to do this at every corner cautiously, until the final hallway
revealed a man with a shotgun. Damn, so
close, she thought. She considered which option of attack was the best, but
her thoughts were cut short when the man began walking towards her. Crap, she thought. Yamaguchi knew that
if she didn’t subdue him before he fired his shotgun, it would alert anyone else
here and she would be in trouble. Crap,
crap, crap, what do I do? She thought. She got the letter opener ready in
one hand and the club ready in the other. She was going to have only one shot
at this.
Or so she
thought. A voice called the man from the other side of the hallway he occupied.
“Hey Walter, get over here. You gotta check this out,” said the voice. Walter
turned around and walked to the man calling him. Yamaguchi heard a door close,
checked to see if the coast was clear, and made her move. In the center of the
hallway was the exit. She headed through it, crossed one final swamp bridge and
walked on dry swampy land. She was free, but needed to get far away from there.
She walked along the path of dead ground and noticed that there were some cars
parked on the side of the path. However, there were three armed guards
patrolling the area. Fan-fucking-tastic, thought Yamaguchi as
she hid in some tall grass. The three men had shotguns like the first, but
Yamaguchi knew that if she took them out, she could hotwire a car and be home
free. She crept in the tall grass and approached the first man, a short,
chubby, greasy looking weasel of a man. A slightly taller and much more hideous
looking man followed him. Yamaguchi waited until they were close and then made
her move. Jumping from the grass, Yamaguchi stabbed the taller man in the back
of the neck with her letter opener, penetrating all the way to the front and
piercing his esophagus and trachea. Before the fat man could say “what the
fuck?” she brought down her makeshift club and hit him in the face. The tall
man let out a shotgun blast at the floor before he fell to the floor,
struggling for breath and dying. Yamaguchi hit fat man in the hand again,
forcing him to drop the shotgun. She raised the club to hit him once more but
he caught it and kicked her away. Yamaguchi looked as he broke it with his two
hands. She jumped for his shotgun, but he tackled her to the ground. Yamaguchi
punched him in the face, but it didn’t faze him. He tried to gain the upper
hand but Yamaguchi didn’t let him. Using her judo training in the police force,
she used his weight to flip him over. She pushed off him and jumped for the
shotgun.
She barely
had the shotgun in her hand before bullets soared right over her head. The
third man, probably hearing the shotgun blast earlier, had finally come to see
the commotion. Yamaguchi rolled underneath one of the nearby cars and snuck
into the tall grass. “She’s on the other side of the car,” screamed the fat man
to his accomplice, a balding Middle Eastern looking gentleman. The fat man
signaled that he would approach her from the right while the other man should
approach from the left. The Middle Eastern man flashed the OK signal and they
slowly crept on each side of the van. Walter and some other man ran from the
house to where they heard the noise, shotguns in hand. “Hey, what’s going on
over here?” screamed the man in the tacky Hawaiian shirt. “Shut the hell up,
Steve. The prisoner’s esca…” the fat man tried to whisper before a shotgun
blast sounded off followed by the screams of the Middle Eastern man. Yamaguchi
ran past two cars and behind the side of a pick up truck. Walter, Steve and the
fat man followed her footsteps. Walter turned and fired but Yamaguchi had
already rolled under the car. The fat man foolishly checked underneath the car
only to be greeted with the barrel end of Yamaguchi’s shotgun. BAM! Only two
more to go. Much to Yamaguchi’s dismay, she heard the noise signifying that her
clip was empty. Walter and Steve heard it too. Yamaguchi tried to reach for the
fat man’s gun, but Steve shot at it, forcing her to retract her hand and
helplessly watch as she gun bounced out of reach. Yamaguchi knew she was a dead
woman if she stood underneath the car, so she slid from beneath the front of
the vehicle. Steve had already ran to the fat man’s location while Walter was
right behind him, both with smug “we got her now” smiles. Yamaguchi knew that
if she tried to run, she was done. So she did the bold thing, the crazy thing,
the only thing.
Yamaguchi nimbly ran up the hood of
the pick up truck and jumped towards her attackers with a split kick before
either knew what was happening. She hit both of them in the face and they all
fell over, Yamaguchi landing in between them.
Steve was the first to react and quickly brought up his shotgun to shoot
Yamaguchi. Yamaguchi quickly smacked the shotgun upward with her palm and
redirected the blast, which stuck Walter and knocked him on his ass, dead. Steve tried to point the shotgun at Yamaguchi
yet again but she was too close. She karate chopped his hand, the shotgun
landing on the floor and blasting into the neighboring car. Shocked from
Yamaguchi’s speed, Steve could not block Yamaguchi’s fierce elbow blow,
breaking his nose and knocking him to the floor. Yamaguchi quickly jumped on
top of him and punched him until he was out cold, his blood all over her fists.
She got up and looked at the scene of chaos before her. She couldn’t help but
let out a little laugh. I’m such a badass,
she thought, content to finally be free. She hotwired the pickup and drove away.
Yamaguchi finally found a road she
recognized and decided to drive back to the police station. She was sure they
were worried about her. The owner of the car left a news radio station running
and Yamaguchi listened as she drove through the dark, spooky Everglades,
wondering if she was in the news. “The
police are reporting that the famous Majestic cruise ship has exploded due to
an engine malfunction.” Yamaguchi turned up the volume, the story
intriguing her. “The Majestic had docked
in New Miami harbor this afternoon before eye witnesses saw the cruise ship
blow up and sink into ocean. Fortunately, no one was on board the ship as it
was to be scrapped for parts in order to make a much larger and efficient
cruise ship. Said harbormaster Ken Glinko, ‘it’s going to be a nightmare to
clean up, but thank God no one was hurt.’ Turning to sports…” Yamaguchi
turned off the radio as she pulled into the police station. Little did she know
that her welcome back party would be short lived.
Part Eight:
Dreams of the Past
Twenty in
the chamber. I only had twenty chances to kill the eight men that were quickly
closing in on Persephone and me. Five men on my right and three on my left.
Twenty shots at freedom
We nodded and opened fire from our makeshift cover of dining
tables. Persephone pinned down the three on the left with her machine gun;
pieces of wood and puffs of marble flying all over. I took aim at the first
man, and with three shots was able to shoot him right through his eye patch.
He fell to the floor with a heavy thud. The other four
returned fire and I quickly ducked behind cover. I waited for the bullets to
stop flying before I tried again. Persephone managed to hit one of her guys in
the back. He let out a yelp of pain before collapsing into violent spasms. I
aimed and fired five more shots, all misses.
A grizzled man with a thin red beard shot back and grazed my
cheek. I felt the blood trickle down my face as I finally hit one of the men in
the abdomen.
Eleven shots left.
I quickly ducked. The three
men on my side were getting closer and I was being overpowered. I tried to
blindly lift my pistol over the table and shoot someone, but a bullet struck
the pistol out of my hand. I watched helplessly as it bounced on the floor away
from me. The three men on my side grew bold and one of them sprinted toward our
direction, an olive skinned man wearing sunglasses. Persephone was too
preoccupied with keeping her side at bay to notice him. I quickly dove for my
gun, turned around and shot as the olive skinned man briskly jumped over our
tables.
The bullet struck him in the abdomen. He fell down clutching
his trigger, firing a volley of bullets that almost hit Persephone. I fired one more into his head, just to be safe.
Nine bullets left.
I quickly
got off the floor and assisted Persephone, who was shocked by the line of
bullets that barely missed her. Once she recovered, Persephone managed to hit
another on her side before her machine gun finally clicked. She was done. She
ducked behind cover, leaving me with the burden of saving our lives. Two on my
left, one on my right. I was surrounded. Each time I tried to take out one
side, the other side would fire.
My bullets bounced
off of the kiosks and cement pillars that they hid behind.
I was grasping at straws and Persephone watched anxiously. I
looked into those golden eyes. Those beautiful golden eyes that haunted me for
ten years. I can’t lose you again. Not
like this, I thought.
Six bullets left.
The three men were
right on top of us. They all charged at the same time. I grazed one in the head...
...and missed the other as the pursuer on the left reached our tables. Knowing I was dead if I stayed still, I quickly jumped backwards and dropped on the floor, shooting him upside down.
...and missed the other as the pursuer on the left reached our tables. Knowing I was dead if I stayed still, I quickly jumped backwards and dropped on the floor, shooting him upside down.
The two men on the
right attempted to shoot me over my makeshift cover, but I forcefully kicked
the table towards them. It knocked them on the floor and they quickly returned
back to cover as bullets flew from behind me. Persephone had picked up one of
the dead man’s guns and clumsily fired it at the two men.
Three bullets left.
All of a
sudden, the ship began to shake violently as explosions caused pieces of roof
to fall all around us. The glass of the storefronts shattered, kiosks toppled
over and chairs rolled down the shopping plaza. One of the pursuers, a muscular
man with a scarred face, charged at me. I fired two shots
...but he caught me off guard and tackled me to the ground,
forcing me to drop my pistol. We rolled around and grappled for our lives as
Persephone switched between keeping the bearded man at bay and trying to shoot the
burly man pinning me down. I tried to punch him in the gut, but I didn’t have
the positioning to retaliate. He punched me in the face and started to choke
me. I grasped at his arms. I tried to regain my breath but he was too strong.
“Viva Cuba. Viva el
bultre,” he said through a malicious smile of gritted teeth.
Persephone hit the bearded man in the Adam’s apple with her
last few bullets and he collapsed in a pool of gushing blood. She stumbled to
my direction as more explosions continued to rock the ship. Seeing that I was being
chocked, she used her machine gun like a club and hit the man on the head. It
didn’t knock him out, but it did make him flinch. I pushed his arms out of the
way and punched him right in the jaw. Persephone hit him harder and finally
he fell off of me. I took my pistol and fired my remaining bullet right between
the eyes. We had won. Persephone took my hand and we ran. “Shouldn’t we be…”
…an explosion above us cut me off. Small embers rained
around us and Persephone threw off her trench coat as it began to catch on
fire. She was wearing a tight diving suit and some strange belt. “ Shouldn’t we
run towards the pier?” I asked, grasping my injured shoulder. “Trust me, amor,”
she panted as we finally made it outside. Around us were two walls of fire. Explosion
after explosion shook the ship. Persephone fiddled with her “utility belt” and
pulled out a long rope with a clip on it.
She attached it to the gate. “You can’t be serious,” I said. She tied a
knot to reinforce the rope. “If we jump from here and this doesn’t work, the
impact will…” I was interrupted when she wrapped her arms tightly around me,
securing the other end of the rope around my waist. “Trust me,” she said again
as she leaned in and kissed me. Even though smoke and flame billowed all around
us, it felt like I was in the safest place I could be. It was the age-old feeling
as if time had stopped. And then she used her momentum to throw us both off of
the balcony.
I watched in fear as the ocean
surface quickly approached, too scared to even scream. This is it. This is suicide, I thought as Persephone and I clenched
each other tighter. All of a sudden, the rope tightened and our death dive was
halted a few feet over the ocean. Our combined weight caused the gate to break,
however, and we clumsily fell into the water. Persephone and I quickly detached
our rope belt as the piece of gate crashed into the water near us. We
resurfaced, half laughing, half panting. “Holy crap, that was amazing,” I said
once I was able to catch my breath. “I didn’t know you were such a wimp,” she
panted, followed by a laugh. We both swam away from the Majestic cruise ship,
which at this point was nothing more than a mountain of fire. Small pieces of
debris rained all around us and we maneuvered through the large waves caused by
the explosions. “This way,” she told me as she led me into the ocean. “Why are
we going this way?” I asked her incredulously. I had lost a lot of blood. I didn’t
know how much more I could push myself. We swam a few more feet before, out of
nowhere, Persephone stood up in the water. What
the hell? Was all I could think before my foot hit something. It was smooth
and polished. Something metal. Persephone crouched down and fiddled with
something. A few beeps were emitted by the contraption, followed by the swish
of something opening. “Come on in,” she said.
I couldn’t believe what I was
seeing. It looked like a submarine, but judging from the space, it was about
the size of a van. I sat snugly in the back while Persephone sat in the chair
and turned it on. “This is incredible,” I said, looking at all of the different
screens and buttons and intricate machinery. “I stole it from the Cubans. A new
portable submarine. A prototype,” she said as she pulled some levers. The ship
hummed to life and soon we were moving. Persephone focused on piloting the sub
and soon the hum nulled me to sleep. I was exhausted. I was awoken by a slight
shake of the sub which made me hit my head against the metal wall. Looking
down, I noticed that my wounds had been bandaged and wrapped up tight. I walked
over to Persephone, who was sitting in her command chair, and I wrapped my arms
around her. “Mi amor,” she cooed as I kissed her on top of the head. I buried
my face into her thick black hair. She scratched the back of my head with one
arm while she continued to pilot with the other. I loved it when she scratched
my head. I let out a small groan of pleasure. Soon, she stopped the sub and we
went to the back to sit down. I wrapped my arms around her as she leaned on my
chest. I kissed her all over her beautiful face. “Mi amor, I need to tell you
what I came to tell you,” she said, looking into my eyes. I stood silent and
waited for her to start.
“My country is dying,” she started
melancholically. “Everything that Cuba once stood for: patriotism, justice,
hope. Everything is dying.” She paused. “Cuba is about to engage in a civil
war,” she said with exasperation. “What? Really?” I asked incredulously. “The
Cuban government is currently engaged in a power struggle. We’re losing, Ace.
It’s taken everything for the government to conceal this information from the
foreign press, but soon we will be evicted,” she paused, “or killed.” She rose
up and walked away from me. “When I first became a spy, it was because I
believed that what my country was doing was right. I fought for a free Cuba, a
beautiful Cuba full of life and love. It was a dream. To wipe away our past and
renew ourselves, to become a new country of prosperity and peace.” She paused.
“We learned from our mistakes. We grew greedy and we paid the price. The
Cuban-East American war was our mistake.” She leaned on one of the control
panels. “However, some people thought
that the war was just and that we lost because of cowardice. To think that they
would call us cowards,” she said enraged. She clenched her hand into a fist.
“Is it cowardice to protect the ones you love? Is it cowardice to choose life
over death?” She punched the wall.
“Many of my friends and loved ones
died for that stupid ideology. That is why I spied for Cardonez. Cardonez knew
what Cuba needed.” “But I thought that Cordonez killed hundreds of his people.
I thought he was trying to become a dictator,” I butted in. “Lies!” she shouted
at me. “All lies spread by Anguilin. That lying cocksucker,” she said through
gritted teeth. “Ace, believe me when I say I never would have left you if I
knew Cordonez was a murdering psychopath,” Persephone said as she calmed down.
“Persephone…” I started, but couldn’t finish. I needed to know though. I needed
to know. “How could you leave me like that?” I finally gathered the courage to
ask. She started to cry. “Ace, I always loved you. I still do. But my country
comes first. I never meant to hurt you, but my country goes first. Always. I’m
sorry.” She burst into heavy sobs.
I stood up and took her into my
arms once again. “Ace, I don’t know how, but Anguilin is planning to reignite
the war of the Americas,” she said sadly. “What do you mean reignite? How?
When?” I asked in shock. “I don’t know, I don’t know,” she said. “All I know is
that whatever the plan, this night vulture is assisting him.” Those two words
filled me with rage. I had almost forgotten about the night vulture in all this
excitement, but hearing that name again reminded me of all the pain he had
caused. “Persephone, my love,” I started, “who is the night vulture?” She
looked down at the floor. “I’m sorry, mi amor, but I don’t know. All I know is
that the night vulture is very powerful. The vulture’s influence is deep and
far.” I was heartbroken. I thought that Persephone could have been the key to
the night vulture’s discovery, but it was just another dead end. “I’m sorry, mi
amor. I’m sorry I can’t help you more than this,” she said wiping her tears. I
grasped her tightly in my arms. “It’s OK, my love,” I replied. “I’m sorry, mi
amor,” she said as I felt a sharp sting in my neck. It was a syringe. I pushed
her away and grabbed my neck. “What did you…” I couldn’t finish. Everything was
going hazy. “Mi amor,” she started. Her voice sounded as if she was talking
into a glass bottle. “Mi amor, I am the only one left. The night vulture has
killed the others. I must leave you but know that I am with you always,” she
said before I passed out and dropped to the floor.
I was awoken by the sound of an EKG
machine and it was already midday. I opened my eyes lazily and tried to rub them
before I noticed my arm in a sling. An IV drip was inserted into it. “Well,
you’re finally awake,” said an all too familiar voice. It was Yamaguchi. She
was covered in some bandages and had on a normal pair of jeans and a loose
green t-shirt with a cow on it. “You look like shit,” I said with a laugh. “You
don’t look much better,” she retorted with a laugh of her own. “Where am I?” I
asked. “Jackson Hospital. You’ve been sleeping for three days now,” she said
with a smile. She walked over to me and kissed my lips lightly. “I missed you,”
she said. The kiss brought visions of Persephone into my head. “How did you
guys find me? Where was…” “Someone contacted the ambulance and we found you by
the beach near Ocean Avenue. We had no idea who placed the call,” she interrupted.
Persephone, I thought. Where are you now? Yamaguchi pulled her
chair closer to me. “And where were you, Yama?” I asked weakly. She smiled.
“You wouldn’t believe me even if I told you,” she said with a laugh. I laughed
too. I was glad to be alive and in familiar territory. “Everyone on the force
has been worried about you,” she said. “Maldonado gave me the week off so that
I could be with you. I probably have a mountain of paperwork to finish when I
get back,” she said happily. “Me too,” I added with a chuckle. The movement
injured my swollen face. “Anyways, I’m going to tell everyone you’re OK so that
they can come and see you,” she said as she rose from her chair. “Yama, wait,”
I said. She paused.
“I need you to tell Maldonado that
something major is going to go down. Something of national importance.” I
paused, thinking of the grandiosity of the news I was about to deliver. “We’re
going to need the government’s involvement. I don’t know how, I don’t know when
but somehow, Cuba plans on reigniting the war of the Americas.” Yamaguchi
gasped in disbelief. “Go quick and tell Maldonado,” I said weakly. “Yes sir,”
she said seriously, bolting out of the room. My eyes grew heavy and soon I fell
asleep again. In my dream, I watched Persephone as she floated away from me
into a dark abyss. Suddenly, I saw those large red eyes and heard that laugh. I
saw graves with the names of my friends: Henry, Yamaguchi, Maldonado. I saw an
East American flag waving patriotically before it burned to ashes. I saw
nuclear bombs exploding, guns and grenades and death. And then I saw the world
crumble around me as I dropped to my knees hopelessly in despair.
Part Nine:
The Portrait
“You’re not going to remove those ridiculous pictures?” I asked Henry as I bit into a slice of meat lover’s pizza from Joe’s Pizzeria. I winced in disgust. The sausage tasted like they were ripped off from a tire. “They’re portraits, not pictures,” Henry said with a mouth full of food. “My husband might be dead, but his memory is not,” he finished before swallowing. “I keep them to remind myself of the good times we had.” “How sentimental you are,” I said sarcastically, staring at the glaring reminders of the hell we had endured. It has been three weeks since the cruise ship incident and all the excitement caused by the night vulture case seemed to die down around the office. An intense week and a half long search turned out to be fruitless. Maldonado was forced to give up the wild goose chase and put his people into more productive endeavors, leaving the case closed with a big question mark at the end. Meanwhile, I had been sitting in the hospital, slowly recovering. I didn’t receive one single word from Persephone and soon even I was starting to wonder if there was any point of continuing the search for the night vulture. When I was finally deemed ready to leave, Henry graciously took me in as his roommate since my place was still a crime scene. Soon, everyone was back to the same routines with nothing but small scars and broken hearts to remind us of the past.
Henry’s apartment was a two bedroom, one bathroom with a small living room and a nice kitchen. It took some time getting used to it all: taking my shoes off so that I wouldn’t stain the wooden floor, not putting the air conditioning above seventy degrees, not recording over his favorite shows. It took some time, but I learned every little idiosyncrasy. Soon, Henry didn’t need to correct my actions anymore. It felt like college all over again. “Hey, I’m going by the office to do a few things quick. You need anything?” I asked him the next night while I fixed my tie. “Naw, I’m good man. Thanks,” he said over the perky voice of the TV news anchor. I found my keys next to the little Buddha statue on the dresser and took off for the office. When I got there, the office was mostly empty. Percy, one of the new officers, was typing a report away in the corner. “Long night, P?” I asked him as I walked by. “You know it,” he said after spitting the toothpick from his mouth. I rounded the corner and entered my office. Sitting in my office chairs were agents Morales and Colt from the CIA. “Well, you took your sweet ass time,” said Colt, a fortysomething year old black man with no hair and freckles under his eyes. He wore a black pinstripe suit with a violet tie and a white dress shirt. I walked up to him and shook his hand. “Sorry I’m late, sir,” I said politely even though I was only five minutes late. I also shook Morales slender hand. Unlike Colt, she did not dress flashy. Morales was about my age with messy blonde hair tied up in a bun and designer glasses covering her light brown eyes. She wore a conservative dress shirt and a pants suit that actually complimented her figure quite nicely. Ever since the night vulture incident had been reported to the East American government officials, these two had been hanging around the office trying to squeeze all the information that they could. Tonight, it was my turn to be squeezed for some fresh pulp again.
“Alright, so how can I help you
today? I already told you what I know and I haven’t come up with any new
details,” I said as we all sat back down. Colt crossed his fingers and leaned
his chin on his hands, analyzing me with his tired green eyes. Morales crossed
her legs and cleared her throat. “Mr. Ace,” she started. “Can we call you
Jeremiah or do you prefer Mr. Ace?” she asked politely. “Just call me Ace.
That’s what everyone else calls me,” I said with a shrug. She nodded. “Alright
Ace, we need you to…” Suddenly, Colt slammed his hands on my desk. “Dammit,
Morales, don’t beat around the bush,” he shouted. “Detective Ace, we know you
blew up the cruise ship. We also know it was you that killed those women.” I
was bewildered by the sudden change in tone. “Are you fucking kidding me?” I
asked incredulously. “Fact is,” started Morales,” There seem to be a lot of
fortunate coincidences regarding this case. How did you escape from an
‘exploding cruise ship filled with gun men’ by yourself again?” She said the
last part in a mocking tone. “I told you. I fought my way through and escaped,”
I said impatiently. I just wanted to storm off. “So you somehow killed twenty
plus men and escaped. The cruise ship just magically exploded?” she said. “I
told you, Maldonado…” “Alan Maldonado has been dead for five years,”
interrupted Colt as he threw a file at me. I opened it. There was a large
picture of Alan with the words “TERMINATED” stamped over it. I looked on in
disbelief. It was definitely the man that had tortured me for the last few
weeks. “We also have video evidence of you working with a Cuban spy. Are you
helping the Cubans?” I was boiling now.
Look!
I shouted, “ I did not kill those girls and I did not blow up that ship. One of the victims was the woman I loved...” “Probably a front” Morales said to Colt. “…And why would I want to blow up a cruise ship? Why would I report it? After all this, how the hell could you suspect me?” I ranted angrily. Agent Colt stood up from his chair and stared into my eyes harshly. “Listen, Detective Ace. We’re on to you. This whole case smells of bullshit. You’re the only connection between every crime scene and frankly, I’m starting to think you made up a pretty tale to tell your coworkers. People like you are eventually revealed for the lying scumbags that they really are. You may have fooled this office, but not us.” “Get the fuck out of here right now,” I shouted at them. It took all my energy not to clock him in the face. Colt smiled cockily as he exited the room with Morales. I threw a glass at the floor in rage. The sound of it shattering drew Percy to my door. “Hey, are you alright?” he asked nicely. “Yeah, I’m fine. Sorry,” I said through gritted teeth.
The feeling of anger carried on into the next day while I was working on my new case. It was a simple “husband murdered wife, husband fled to mother’s house, husband tries to beat your face in with a baseball bat, husband is sent to jail for a long time” case.
Nothing special.
Agent Colt’s words about Maldonado being dead buzzed in my head; I wondered where Persephone was now and if she knew anything about this. I pulled into the parking lot of Henry’s apartment complex. It was already almost midnight and I was dead tired. Henry was already asleep when I entered but I wasn’t ready to go to bed just yet. I pulled a cold beer out of the fridge and turned on the TV. It was on Henry’s favorite news channel. The reporter babbled on about how the ambassador of West America, Jack Russell Jackson, was going to tour East American states in a “diplomatic rejuvenation of unity” tour. He was starting out in New York and ending his tour in Atlanta. “Nobody takes us seriously anymore,” I mumbled to myself. I watched as they showed a montage of his recent stops. “Why do you have that damn thing so loud,” muttered Henry as he came into the living room rubbing his eyes. He was wearing only a tight pair of tighty whities. He looked like a model with his tight six pack abs. “Can you believe this dick? Too good for New Miami,” I told him as I turned off the TV. Henry pulled a beer out of the fridge. “Actually, Mad ol’ Jack is coming down to New Miami. He just added us today. Apparently, his mind was changed. He’ll be here by the end of the week,” Henry replied. “Oh yeah, well that’s swell,” I said sarcastically.
Henry went back to bed. I lied down on the couch and looked at Alonso’s pictures hanging on the wall. The first was that portrait of George de La Marquisade that he had revealed so long ago. I didn’t like Marquisade. I thought he was a joke; A rich pretty boy cult of personality who has a position of power and doesn’t know what to do with it. Not like Mad Jack, who was a war veteran and a scholar from a modest upbringing. Mad Jack was a much better ambassador. But then again, who cares? Politics is bullshit, I thought to myself. Politics. I threw my beer can at the picture and it fell down to the floor with a thud. Great, now I have to pick this stupid picture up. I should just throw it away, I thought as I got up from the couch. That’s when I noticed something strange. Tucked in a corner behind the picture was a manila envelope. “What the hell?” I muttered to myself. I opened it to find some kind of small writing pad. “Interesting,” I said I flipped through the pages. The first few pages were mundane: grocery lists, memos, work schedules. Alonso had a job? I wondered as I continued flipping. Then one page caught my eye. It was a list of names, lines crossing out most of them. The only name on the list not crossed out was Persephone. I also recognized Mary’s name a few spaces above hers, crossed out. My eyes widened. It was a list of all the previous night vulture victims. The heading at the top was Former NV Associates.
Night Vulture associates? Persephone? Mary?
I thought. I
continued to read. The next page had a few addresses, again most crossed out. I
didn’t recognize any except for the city hall address. Are these all government buildings? I would need to check it out
later at headquarters. The next page had dates followed by little
initials and notes. Apparently,
something happened at E. B shipping agency a few months ago. A month after that, a “general meeting” occurred.
“Maldonado” was next to a date from a month ago. Finally, there were two future
dates. The last one caught my eye. It was to begin in three weeks. “Begin
operation Night Vulture.” I was so distracted by the words night vulture that I
almost skipped the penultimate date. It was for the end of the week. All it
said was “JRJ.” I thought about it until it final hit me. Jack Russell Jackson. Holy crap, that’s how they’re gonna do it, I
thought.
“Henry, wake up,” I shouted as I bust through his room excitedly. Henry jumped up in his bed. “Holy shit, man. What the hell is wrong with you?” he screamed at me. “Henry, Henry, how long has Alonso had that picture?” I asked vigorously. Henry rubbed his eyes. “I don’t know. A few months maybe?” he replied groggily. “Take a look at what I just found,” I said as I handed him the note pad. I explained its contents as I watched Henry’s eyes grow with each turning page. “I finally figured out what the Night Vulture is going to do,” I said with content. Henry looked at me in anticipation. “He’s going to kill Jack Russell Jackson and try to reignite the War of the Americas” “Holy crap,” responded Henry. “We gotta get this to the CIA people quick.” “Already on it,” I said as I pulled up my cell phone. I dialed the number that they had given all of us. “This is agent Colt, what do you want?” he grumbled into the phone. I wish I could see his stupid face now without its cocky grin.
Just as the planner had said, Jack Russell had arrived in New Miami a few days later. I was assigned to security detail and I waivered outside his door with three or four swat officers and agent Colt. Jack Russell came into the building around midday and I finally got to meet the man. Everything about him, including his presence, was powerful. He was a tall man, around six foot three inches, and he had the physique of a man who used to work out but stopped a while ago. Although his hair was slowly turning white, he looked incredible for a man who was in his mid-fifties. He gave me a nice firm handshake and said, “Keep up the good work, young man. The force needs more people like you.” “Thank you sir,” I replied proudly. Out of the corner of my eye, I could see agent Colt grumbling to himself. “Now if you gentleman don’t mind, I will be meeting the mayor soon and I don’t want to be late for my trip to the beach.” We all chuckled politely. He closed the door behind him and for forty-five minutes, nobody said a word. It was actually pretty boring.
After another hour of security detail, I finally needed a bathroom break. “Hey guys, I’ll be right back. Just gotta take a leak,” I told them as I walked to the bathroom down the long hall. “I’ll join you,” said agent Colt. We walked together in silence until we entered the bathroom. “Don’t think that this changes anything detective. I’m still on to you,” he said threateningly. “What’s you deal, Colt?” I responded as I pulled my zipper down. “How the hell can you still blame me? Do you need a scapegoat? Do I make you look bad?” I asked sarcastically. “Fuck you, Detective,” was all he could respond. I had just finished my business when I suddenly heard screaming outside. “Hey what the fuck are you doing?” resonated in the bathroom walls, followed by gunshots. Colt and I looked at each other in shock. We zipped up quickly and ran back to the hallway, but it was covered in thick smoke. “Fuck, smoke grenades,” said Colt as he pulled out a pistol. I did likewise. “We need to get to the ambassador,” he said. Gunshots ricocheted all around us as we used the walls to feel our way back to the ambassador’s office. A swat man pointed his shotgun at us. “Wait don’t shoot,” Colt and I shouted in unison. “Get in quick. They’re all over the place,” said the swat officer. We ran into the office. “What the hell is going on?” said Jack Russell, who was hiding behind one of the twin sofas. “Sir, it seems that the assailants came in disguised as our same swat gear. We let our guard down for a second. One of them dropped a smoke bomb. They shot down my two partners,” said the swat officer. We joined Jack Russell behind the couch. “How many of them are there?” I asked. “I have no idea,” said the swat officer. “What the fuck are we going to do now then?” I asked impatiently. “I don’t think these guys are gonna let up,” said the swat officer. The doors blasted open as shots from a machine gun flew all around us, shattering the windows behind us. We returned fire. “We need to get out of here. They’re going to surround us if we stay,” screamed agent Colt. “Then there’s only one thing we can do gentleman,” said Jack Russell as he pulled out a pistol hidden in his sock.
We fight back and we
run like hell.
[TO BE CONTINUED]
I'm hooked. Can't wait for the next one.
ReplyDeleteYou lose your voice in a couple of spots:
"She walked over to me; the sound of her heels the only thing breaking the silence of seeing my former love again after so long. " (clunky sentence)
"Knowing we’d be overwhelmed, I grabbed Persephone by the hand and we ran into the cruise ship. It was a large ship. We ran past the fancy lobby with the chandeliers and into the shopping area. The walls were lined with overpriced stores and crappy looking display kiosks. With her heels, we knew we couldn’t outrun them, so we stopped running and prepared to face them."
Question I have: is there a reason for red eyes?
Author here. Yeah Sorry about that. Since I'm in med school, what usually ends up happening is that I wait until I have the chance to write and then I just it all in one big block as if writing it free form. Then I got through it two or three times and try to trim it and make it flow nicer. Sometimes I have trouble getting it from mind to paper but as a fellow writer you know how it goes. If med school didn't interfere, I'd trim it even more. Thanks for the feedback and glad you enjoy it.
Deletethanks, I made some changes to it, hopefully it flows better. As for the eyes, you'll just have to wait and read. Next part to arrive Friday, March 9th!!
ReplyDeleteThanks Alex. I should have caught those clunky sentences but somehow they slipped through during editing. But aside from the few mixups you're doing an awesome job at storytelling!!
ReplyDeletegracias senor!
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